Etsay Woldu Anbesu1, Setognal Birara Aychiluhm1, Mussie Alemayehu2. 1. Department of Public Health, College of Medicine and Health Sciences, Samara University, Samara, Ethiopia. 2. School of Public health, College of Health Science, Mekelle University, Mek'ele, Tigray, Ethiopia.
Abstract
BACKGROUND: Globally, the estimated annual number of new cases of curable sexually transmitted infections occurring among young people aged 15-24 years is approximately 178.5 million. There are fragmented and inconsistent findings on preventive practices for sexually transmitted infections. Thus, this systematic review and meta-analysis protocol aimed to estimate the pooled prevalence of preventive practices of sexually transmitted infections and identify its determinants among young people in Ethiopia. METHODS: The Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Review and Meta-analyses (PRISMA) will be used to develop the review protocol. Online databases such as PubMed, CINAHL, Scopus, Google, and Google Scholar will be used to search published and unpublished studies. The Joanna Briggs Institute Meta-Analysis of Statistics Assessment and Review Instrument will be used to assess the quality of the study. Statistical heterogeneity will be checked using the Cochran Q test and I2 statistics. Subgroup analysis and meta-regression will be performed to identify the sources of heterogeneity. The statistical analysis will be performed using STATA version 14 software. A random-effects model will be performed to estimate the pooled prevalence and identify determinants of preventive practices of sexually transmitted infections. DISCUSSION: Young people have a high unmet need for sexual and reproductive health services and poor preventive practices toward sexually transmitted infections. Although there are studies on preventive practices for sexually transmitted infections, there is no study finding on the pooled prevalence of preventive practices for sexually transmitted infections and its determinants among young people in Ethiopia. Thus, this systematic review and meta-analysis protocol will help to develop appropriate strategies.
BACKGROUND: Globally, the estimated annual number of new cases of curable sexually transmitted infections occurring among young people aged 15-24 years is approximately 178.5 million. There are fragmented and inconsistent findings on preventive practices for sexually transmitted infections. Thus, this systematic review and meta-analysis protocol aimed to estimate the pooled prevalence of preventive practices of sexually transmitted infections and identify its determinants among young people in Ethiopia. METHODS: The Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Review and Meta-analyses (PRISMA) will be used to develop the review protocol. Online databases such as PubMed, CINAHL, Scopus, Google, and Google Scholar will be used to search published and unpublished studies. The Joanna Briggs Institute Meta-Analysis of Statistics Assessment and Review Instrument will be used to assess the quality of the study. Statistical heterogeneity will be checked using the Cochran Q test and I2 statistics. Subgroup analysis and meta-regression will be performed to identify the sources of heterogeneity. The statistical analysis will be performed using STATA version 14 software. A random-effects model will be performed to estimate the pooled prevalence and identify determinants of preventive practices of sexually transmitted infections. DISCUSSION: Young people have a high unmet need for sexual and reproductive health services and poor preventive practices toward sexually transmitted infections. Although there are studies on preventive practices for sexually transmitted infections, there is no study finding on the pooled prevalence of preventive practices for sexually transmitted infections and its determinants among young people in Ethiopia. Thus, this systematic review and meta-analysis protocol will help to develop appropriate strategies.
Sexually transmitted infections (STIs) are diseases such as gonorrhea, syphilis, chancroids, lymphogranuloma venerum, and more than 30 different bacteria, viruses, and parasites. STIs can be curable and incurable. The curable STIs include gonorrhea, syphilis, trichomonas, and chlamydia. The incurable STIs include herpes simplex virus, hepatitis B, human immunodeficiency virus (HIV), and human papilloma virus (HPV). STIs are transmitted through sexual contact, such as vaginal, anal, and oral sex. It can also spread through nonsexual means via blood or blood products and mother to fetus during pregnancy, childbirth, and breastfeeding. The common symptoms or syndromes of STIs include urethral discharge, vaginal discharge, genital ulcer, lower abdominal pain, inguinal bubo, neonatal conjunctivitis, and scrotal swelling [1-4].Globally, the estimated annual number of new cases of curable STIs that occur among people aged 15–49 years is 357 million, and approximately half of them are between 15–24 years [5, 6]. Every day, more than 1 million STIs are acquired [1]. STIs are health threats to adolescents and young people in developed and developing countries [4, 7–11]. In Ethiopia, although there is a lack of surveillance data, the self-reported prevalence of STIs among female and male youth aged 15–24 years was 3% and 1%, respectively [12]. STIs cause serious consequences, including an increased risk of HIV infection, stillbirth, neonatal death, low birth weight, sepsis, pneumonia, and neonatal conjunctivitis or blindness [1].The age of young people by itself is a risk factor for many factors. It is a critical developmental period where youth begin to know and explain their sexual values and behaviors. They are at high risk for unsafe sexual behaviors, including STIs, unplanned pregnancy, abortion, low school performance, psychosocial problems, and economic crises [1, 13]. Moreover, rapid reproductive maturity among young people could lead to early sexual initiation and unsafe sex with the reluctance to use contraceptive methods [14-17].In addition, factors such as multiple sexual partners, engaging in risky sexual behavior (RSB), sex without condoms, sex with older partners, consumption of alcohol and illicit drugs, cultural, religious, peer pressure, watching pornography, being single, nondisclosure of HIV status, and conflicts between couples and families affect young people’s sexual behavior [4, 8, 10, 18–24].In Ethiopia, although STIs remain one of the sustainable development goal (SDG) agendas [25] and the development of national guidelines for the management of STIs using a syndromic approach [26], there is a lack of attention and surveillance data on preventive practice toward STIs in young people [27]. Moreover, although studies have been conducted in different parts of the country on the preventive practices of STIs among young people, there are inconsistent findings on prevalence and its determinants. Thus, this systematic review and meta-analysis protocol aimed to estimate the pooled prevalence of preventive practices of STIs and identify its determinants among young people in Ethiopia.What is the pooled prevalence of preventive practices toward STIs among young people in Ethiopia?What are the determinants of preventive practices toward STIs among young people in Ethiopia?To determine the pooled prevalence of preventive practices toward STIs among young people in EthiopiaTo identify the determinants of preventive practices toward STIs among young people in Ethiopia
Methods
Review protocol development
The Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Review and Meta-analyses (PRISMA) will be used to develop the review protocol [28], and the PRISMA-P 2015 checklist will be used to report the protocol procedures [29] (S1 File).
Exposure is a determinant that increases or decreases the likelihood of preventive practices toward sexually transmitted infections.
Comparison
The reference group for each determinant in each study will be the comparison variable. It may include good knowledge versus poor, positive attitude versus negative, education versus no education, access to information versus no accesses, consistent use of condoms versus not.
Outcome
The outcome variable will be the pooled prevalence of preventive practices of STIs. Studies with the primary objective of determining the prevalence of preventive practices of STIs and their determinants among young people in Ethiopia will be considered.
Data source and search strategies
Online databases such as PubMed, CINAHL, Scopus, Google, and Google Scholar will be used to search published and unpublished studies. As searching Google and Google Scholar leads to numerous studies, a limited number of studies will be screened from Google and Google Scholar using the phrase “Preventive practices toward Sexually Transmitted Infection in Ethiopia”. The two authors (EW and SB) will retrieve the studies. In addition, across-reference search will be performed to add other related studies from the final included studies that may be missed during the database search. The search terms are indicated in S2 File. The search string will be adapted based on the specific requirements of the database to identify relevant studies. Retrieve studies will be exported to Endnote version 8 reference Manager software [31].
Eligibility criteria
All observational studies (cross-sectional, case–control, and cohort) will be included in the systematic review and meta-analysis. Studies that reported the prevalence of preventive practices of STIs and its determinants among young people in Ethiopia will be included. Moreover, studies that reported only the prevalence of preventive practices of STIs or at least measured associations between determinant variables and the preventive practice of STIs will be considered. Institutional and community-based studies will be included. We will exclude studies that only address the qualitative approach. For both quantitative and qualitative data, only the quantitative data will be considered. We will not make restrictions on the date of publication. Studies published other than those in the English language, expert opinions, conferences, and case reports will be excluded.
Selection of studies
The two authors (EW and SB) will independently screen the studies based on the titles and abstracts. Duplicate, irrelevant title, and abstract studies will be removed from the citation manager. The quality of full text studies will be evaluated, and studies that are not eligible will be removed. We will discuss with the third author (MA) to resolve any disagreement among reviewers during the review process. The selection process flow diagram will be presented using the PRISMA chart (S3 File).
Quality assessment
To assess the quality and validity of the studies, the Joanna Briggs Institute Meta-Analysis of Statistics Assessment and Review Instrument (JBI-MAStARI) will be used [32]. The quality assessment will focus on clear inclusion criteria, study subjects and setting, standard measurement criteria, exposure and outcome measurements, and appropriate statistical analysis (S4 File). The quality of the studies will be assessed independently by the two authors (EW and SB). Studies 50% and above of the quality scale will be considered for the final systematic review and meta-analysis. During the quality review of the studies, any disagreement among reviewers will be resolved with the third author (MA).
Data extraction
A data extraction template form on Microsoft Excel (2016) will be used. Before the beginning of the actual data extraction, we will pilot the Microsoft Excel data extraction form. The first author’s name, publication year, study area, study design, sample size, associated factors, odds ratio, and prevalence of the studies will be included in the data extraction template. In addition, we will calculate the logarithm and standard error (SE) of the prevalence and odds ratio. The two authors (EW and SB) will extract the data independently. Discussion will be made for any difference with a third author (MA). We will contact the corresponding author of the studies in case of missing data or incomplete reports.
Data synthesis and statistical analysis
Narrative synthesis of data will be done for the included studies. Summary tables and graphs will be performed to describe the characteristics of the included studies. Random-effects model [33] will be performed to estimate the overall pooled prevalence of preventive practices ofSTIs and identify its determinants among youths in Ethiopia. A 95% CI will be used to declare the statistical significance. Statistical heterogeneity will be checked using the Cochran Q test [34] and I2 statistics [35]. I2 values represent 25% low, 50% moderate, and 75% substantial heterogeneity. Subgroup nalysis and meta-regression will be done toidentify the sources of heterogeneity. Sensitivity analysis will be performed to assess the effect ofstudies on the overall estimation. The presence of publication bias will be checked usingfunnel plot [36], Egger’s, and Beggar’s test [37].
Discussion
This systematic review and meta-analysis protocol aimed to estimate the pooled prevalence of preventive practices of STIs and identify its determinants among young people in Ethiopia. Although young people are sexually active, they have an unmet need for sexual and reproductive health services. The common barriers in low- and middle-income countries include lack of behavioral change and accessibility of services [38-40]. Despite different interventions implemented to enhance the preventive practice of STIs among young people, the problem is still challenging in low-income countries, including Ethiopia [12, 26].To the best of our knowledge, there is no study finding on the pooled prevalence of preventive practices of STIs and its determinants among young people in Ethiopia. Thus, this systematic review and meta-analysis protocol will help policymakers develop appropriate interventions on preventive practices of STIs in Ethiopia. This study protocol may have limited heterogeneity between studies. Only observational study designs published in the English language will be included.
PRISMA-P 2015 checklist.
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Draft of search strategy to be used using PubMed electronic database.
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Diagrammatic presentation of the studies selection process for systematic review.
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JBI critical appraisals for observational studies as shown in the link below https://jbi.global/critical-appraisal-tools.
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes********** 6. Review Comments to the AuthorPlease use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics.You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study.(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This article represents a protocol for a systematic review on an important topic in developing countries. The authors utilized the PRISMA statement to establish a standard protocol for their study.-Line 48: It is more appropriate to say: mother to fetus instead of “mother to child”-Lines 55-57: “In Ethiopia, … respectively”. This sentence seems a bit unclear. Please rewrite it more transparently. A native English language editor can resolve minor issues in the use of the English language in this manuscript.-Lines 77-78, 80, 124, 125, 209, 213, 215: please use the acronym instead of “sexually transmitted infections”.-Line 129: “CINAH”, did you mean CINAHL?-Line 129: Please indicate how you will screen the results from google and google scholar. For example, indicate if you want to screen a limited number of studies in these search engines. Usually, searching in google and google scholar leads to numerous studies, which screening all of them is not feasible.-Lines 128-145 and additional file 2: Some alterations can help to improve the quality and feasibility of the search strategy:I think the presented search strategy is too broad and will result in numerous irrelevant studies. For example, based on additional file 2 and using Term 5 to search in PubMed, there will be more than 812 thousand results, which is definitely too high to be screened. I do recommend consulting with an expert to develop a more specific search strategy.Also, when you use “prevention & control OR control” it seems redundant. Because when you search “control” it automatically contains “prevention & control”. Another similar example is “Condoms OR Condoms use”. Please revise your search strategy in this regard.You used “Unsafe Sex”, two times in Term #1.In addition, I suggest mentioning the search strategy only in additional file 2, and removing it from the main text to prevent redundancy.********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public.Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No[NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.7 Dec 2021Response to reviewer#1� Mother to fetus (line 48)� Women and men … respectively (line 56-57.)� STIs (line 76-77, 124, 126, 14-143, 182, 191, 195, 199, 201 )� CINAHL (Line 129 )� As searching in Google and Google scholar leads to numerous studies, limited number of studies will be screened from Google and Google scholar using this phrase “Preventive practices towards Sexually Transmitted Infection in Ethiopia” (line 130-132)� Search strategy (additional file 2) (line 135)� Filter will be applied on PubMed database on titles/abstract, full text, journal articles, observational studies, and English language to manage the available studies (additional file 2).Submitted filename: Response to Reviewers.docxClick here for additional data file.28 Dec 2021
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As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable?Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes********** 4. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No********** 6. Review Comments to the AuthorPlease use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics.You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study.(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed most of my comments. The protocol is now technically sound, however, the manuscript still needs a revision in terms of English language use, and some alterations are necessary:The authors want to search four databases: PubMed, CINAHL, Google, and Google Scholar. I recommend adding "Scopus" to widen the scope of your literature search.Line 20: This sentence is unclear “: Globally, about 178.5 million new cases of curable sexually transmitted infections occurred among young people aged 15-24 years.” OR in line 52, 53: “Globally, about 357 million new cases of curable sexually transmitted infections occurred among people aged 15–49 years, and over half of them were between 15-24 years ”Are these sentences about the estimated "annual" new cases? If so, the authors should mention.Line 26: Change CINAH to “CINAHL” in the abstract.Line 43, 54, 63, 74: Abbreviations should be defined in the text just at first use. You repeated Sexually transmitted infections in the mentioned lines.Line 57: Change “STIs causes” to “STIs cause”Line 46: Abbreviations should be defined in the text at first use: human immunodeficiency virus (HIV)Line 65: Do you mean “contraceptive methods”?Line 73: STIs “remain”Line 145, 146: “However, for studies that examined both quantitative and qualitative study” change to “both quantitative and qualitative data”Line 148: Would you please explain why you want to exclude “national surveys”? For example, why do you want to exclude an Ethiopian national survey on this topic?********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public.Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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3 Jan 2022Response to reviewer#1� Scopus data base (line 28, 127 )� Globally, the estimated annual new cases of curable sexually transmitted infections occurred among young people aged 15-24 years was about 178.5 million ((line 20-21 ). 178.5 million new cases was just to estimate about half of the 357 million cases among people aged 15–49 years were between 15-24 years. i.e 50% of 357 ≈178.5 (line 55)� Globally, the estimated annual new cases of curable sexually transmitted infections occurred among people aged 15–49 years was 357 million, and about half of them were between 15-24 years (line 54-55).� CINAHL (line 27)� STIs (line 45, 54, 56, 64, 74, 86,88, )� human immunodeficiency virus (HIV) (line 48)� STIs cause (line 59)� contraceptive methods (line 67)� STIs remain (line 73)� Both quantitative and qualitative data (line 143)� National survey. It was mistake and corrected now (line 145)Submitted filename: Response to Reviewers.docxClick here for additional data file.11 Jan 2022Preventive practices toward Sexually Transmitted Infections and its determinants among young people in Ethiopia: a protocol for systematic review and Meta-analysisPONE-D-21-25527R2Dear Dr. Anbesu ,We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication.An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org.If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org.Kind regards,Ali RostamiAcademic EditorPLOS ONEAdditional Editor Comments (optional):Thank you for revisions. The manuscript is acceptable. There is only one issue. Please use full term for STIs in beginning of introduction.Best regardsReviewers' comments:26 Jan 2022PONE-D-21-25527R2Preventive practices toward sexually transmitted infections and their determinants among young people in Ethiopia: a protocol for systematic review and meta-analysisDear Dr. Anbesu:I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department.If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org.If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org.Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access.Kind regards,PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staffon behalf ofDr. Ali RostamiAcademic EditorPLOS ONE
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