| Literature DB >> 34084854 |
Mostafa Amiri1, Ali Alami2, Mohammad Matlabi3, Nematullah Shomoossi4.
Abstract
BACKGROUND: As nonnative speakers of English, Iranian health researchers/authors often need to publish in English; however, published manuscripts may reflect a need for language editing. The study is aimed to investigate the language accuracy of Persian authors' articles published in Iranian health journals, and to explore whether these journals take steps towards an acceptable level of Standard written English.Entities:
Keywords: Academic English; health journals; language errors; manuscripts; scientific writing
Year: 2021 PMID: 34084854 PMCID: PMC8150060 DOI: 10.4103/jehp.jehp_793_20
Source DB: PubMed Journal: J Educ Health Promot ISSN: 2277-9531
The frequency and percentage of errors in descending order
| Rank | Type of error | Frequency (%) |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Punctuation | 989 (22.88) |
| 2 | Spacing | 453 (10.48) |
| 3 | Articles | 410 (9.49) |
| 4 | Wrong word | 376 (8.5) |
| 5 | Pluralization | 363 (8.40) |
| 6 | Capitalization | 187 (4.32) |
| 7 | Subject-verb agreement | 191 (4.42) |
| 8 | Ambiguous sentences | 159 (3.68) |
| 9 | Transitional words/phrases | 154 (3.57) |
| 10 | Prepositions | 142 (3.29) |
| 11 | Verb tenses | 120 (2.78) |
| 12 | Conjunctions | 117 (2.71) |
| 13 | Active/passive voice | 115 (2.66) |
| 14 | Persian structure | 107 (2.48) |
| 15 | Possessives | 102 (2.36) |
| 16 | Sentence fragments | 65 (1.50) |
| 17 | Idioms | 61 (1.42) |
| 18 | Relative pronouns | 60 (1.39) |
| 19 | Run-on sentences | 49 (1.13) |
| 20 | Spelling | 46 (1.06) |
| 21 | Word order | 37 (0.86) |
| 22 | Auxiliary verbs | 19 (0.44) |
| Total | 4322 (100) |
Examples of subcategories of discoursal errors and their corrected forms
| Subcategories of discoursal errors | Error identification | Error correction |
|---|---|---|
| Ambiguous sentence | E6 Physical activity of participants was assessed by validated Persian, last 7-day long form of IPAQ | The physical activity of participants during the last 7 days was assessed through a form of IPAQ which had already been validated in Persian |
| Persian Structure | B7 | |
| Sentence Fragment | B5 The levels of trace metals observed in the current research with those reported in various locations around the world | The levels of trace metals observed in the current research were compared with those reported in various locations around the world |
| Run-on Sentence | D3 However, the prevalence of lumbar disk hernia was higher in men in comparison to women and as the higher educational level, the lower prevalence of disk hernia. | ………. was higher in men in comparison to women. |
IPAQ=International Physical Activity Questionnaire
Examples of subcategories of grammatical errors and their corrected forms
| Subcategories of grammatical errors | Error identification | Error correction |
|---|---|---|
| Articles | B4 The aim of … to evaluate | The … evaluate the |
| Pluralization | B5 The IARC … into | The … |
| Subject-verb agreement | E1 Most | Most … |
| Prepositions | C8 | Despite extensive…. |
| Verb Tense | A5 Pseudocyst form of | Pseudocyst … |
| Conjunctions | B8 It is estimated … fuels (coal, oil | It is estimated … fuels (coal, oil, |
| Active/passive voice | D1 This … study | This … |
| Possessives | A8 Thus | Thus, |
| Relative pronouns | A1 The effect of Na4EDTA ranged from 25 to 75 mg/L on extraction efficiency was evaluated. | The … Na4EDTA which ranged …. |
| Word order | D2 | |
| Auxiliary verbs | B5 As mentioned …, and there a good correlation between …. | As …, |
Examples of subcategories of lexical errors and their corrected forms
| Subcategories of lexical errors | Error identification | Error correction |
|---|---|---|
| Wrong word | B7 | |
| Transitional words/phrases | E4 | |
| Idioms | B7 |
Categorization of errors in descending order
| Major category | Error subcategory | Frequency (%) |
|---|---|---|
| Grammatical errors | Articles | 410 (9.49) |
| Pluralization | 363 (8.40) | |
| Subject-verb agreement | 191 (4.42) | |
| Prepositions | 142 (3.29) | |
| Verb Tense | 120 (2.78) | |
| Conjunctions | 117 (2.71) | |
| Active/passive voice | 115 (2.66) | |
| Possessives | 102 (2.36) | |
| Relative pronouns | 60 (1.39) | |
| Word order | 37 (0.86) | |
| Auxiliary verbs | 19 (0.44) | |
| 11 | 1676 (38.75) | |
| Mechanical errors | Punctuation | 989 (22.88) |
| Spacing | 453 (10.48) | |
| Capitalization | 187 (4.32) | |
| Spelling | 46 (1.06) | |
| 4 | 1675 (38.74) | |
| Lexical errors | Wrong word | 376 (8.5) |
| Transitional Words/phrases | 154 (3.57) | |
| Idioms | 61 (1.42) | |
| 3 | 591 (13.67) | |
| Discoursal errors | Ambiguous sentence | 159 (3.68) |
| Persian structure | 107 (2.48) | |
| Sentence fragment | 65 (1.50) | |
| Run-on sentence | 49 (1.13) | |
| 4 | 380 (8.79) | |
| Total | 22 | 4322 (100) |
Examples of subcategories of mechanical errors and their corrected forms
| Subcategories of mechanical errors | Error identification | Error correction |
|---|---|---|
| Punctuation | D6 The question of noise pollution in this | The question of noise pollution in this district has been neglected …. |
| Spacing | D5 Variables such | Variables … |
| Capitalization | E7 In | In |
| Spelling | C5 |