| Literature DB >> 24048625 |
David K Raynor1, David Bryant.
Abstract
OBJECTIVES: Apply 'user testing' methodology to test the readability of a European Public Assessment Report (EPAR) summary-which describes how the decision was made by the European Medicines Agency to approve a medicine.Entities:
Keywords: PUBLIC HEALTH; THERAPEUTICS
Year: 2013 PMID: 24048625 PMCID: PMC3780304 DOI: 10.1136/bmjopen-2013-003185
Source DB: PubMed Journal: BMJ Open ISSN: 2044-6055 Impact factor: 2.692
Figure 1The original EPAR summary on paper (round 1).
Figure 2The revised EPAR summary on paper (round 2).
Figure 3The original EPAR summary on screen (round 3).
Figure 4The revised EPAR summary on screen (round 4).
Figure 5Key points of information tested.
European Public Assessment Report summary paper version: original (round 1) and revised (round 2)
| Original (round 1) | Revised (round 2) | |||
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Questions | Number of points found/understood | Target met? | Number of points found/understood | Target met? |
| 1 Who has this report been written for? | 7 / 7 | No | 8 / 8 | No |
| 2 When is Bondronat used in breast cancer? | 9 / 4 | No | 10 / 7 | No |
| 3 What is the purpose of this report? | 7 / 0 | No | 9 / 9 | Yes |
| 4 What can the tablets do to the food pipe? | 10 / 0 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 5 Who made the decision about Bondronat described in this report? | 10 / 1 | No | 9 / 9 | Yes |
| 6 What group of medicines does Bondronat belong to? | 7 / 7 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 7 What did Committee for Medicinal Products for Human Use (CHMP) decide about Bondronat? | 10 / 10 | Yes | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 8 The tablets can irritate the food pipe. Which people cannot have the tablets as a result of this? | 9 / 8 | Yes | 10 / 8 | No |
| 9 What two things were weighed up before decision made about whether Bondronat should be approved? | 7 / 7 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 10 How does Bondronat prevent fractures, or broken bones? | 10 / 9 | Yes | 8 / 7 | No |
| 11 In the studies looking into bone problems or complications, what was looked at to see if Bondronat was working? | 5 / 4 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 12 During the studies into high calcium levels, how many people did the 4 mg dose work in? | 9 / 9 | Yes | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 13 How many people receiving a Bondronat infusion got a fever? | 10 / 3 | No | 10 / 8 | No |
| 14 During the study of bone complications, what was Bondronat compared with? | 9 / 9 | Yes | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 15 Suppose you want more information on how the decision was made about Bondronat, what should you do? | 9 / 1 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 16 How many people taking the Bondronat tablet got an inflamed food pipe? | 10 / 5 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 17 In the research studies of high calcium levels in the blood, what was Bondronat compared against? | 9 / 9 | Yes | 9 / 9 | Yes |
| 18 When Bondronat was studied in the treatment of bone complications, which group of patients got a new bone problem first? | 8 / 8 | No | 9 / 9 | Yes |
| 19 If you are a patient and want more information about Bondronat, what should you do? | 8 / 7 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| Total number of passes | 6 | 14 | ||
Demographics of participants in each round
| Female (F) or male (M) | Age range | Educational status* | Use of literature at work † | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Round 1 (10) | 7F, 3M | 29–74 | 1=4, 2=4, 3=2 | Y=3, N=7 |
| Round 2 (10) | 7F, 3M | 22–71 | 1=4, 2=4, 3=2 | Y=3, N=7 |
| Round 3 (10) | 7F, 3M | 26–72 | 1=4, 2=4, 3=2 | Y=3, n=7 |
| Round 4 (10) | 7F, 3M | 21–73 | 1=4, 2=4, 3=2 | Y=3, N=7 |
*Educational status: 1=education complete by 16 years; 2=A-level or equivalent; 3=higher educational graduate.
†Use of literature at work: Y=yes: uses written documents regularly at work; N=no: written document not used regularly at work, not working or retired.
Changes made in round 1 related to the responses to specific questions
| Question | Changes made | |
|---|---|---|
| 2 | When is Bondronat used in breast cancer? | Original long sentence with multiple bracketing incorporated into 2 new subheadings, separated into dedicated bullet points |
| 3 | What is the purpose of this report? | Original text in italics in box at beginning became part of main document under new heading ‘Who is this report for’ |
| 4 | What can the tablets do to the oesophagus or food pipe? | In original, mentioned both in the ‘How is Bondronat used’ section and ‘What is the risk’ section in isolation. Changed so clear in both places what problem was, and how it related to necessary actions |
| 5 | Who made the decision about Bondronat described in this report? | Original did not make clear the membership of CHMP—remedied in revised version under the heading ‘Who made the decision?’ in first section of the document |
| 11 | In the studies looking into bone problems or complications, what was looked at to see if Bondronat was working? | Answer was number of new bone complications—in original in middle of paragraph containing variety of pieces of information about the study. Revision included new subheading ‘What did the studies look for’ |
| 13 | How many people receiving a Bondronat infusion got a fever? | Original listed side effects in long paragraph with long sentences. Revision bulleted the side effects, and separated out those relating to ‘drip’ and tablets |
| 15 | Suppose you want more information on how the decision was made about Bondronat, what should you do? | Information moved from original boxed italicised text into a new subsection titled ‘Where to get more information’ |
| 16 | How many people taking the Bondronat tablet got an inflamed food pipe? | Information became part of bulleted list of side effects (see above), and frequency simplified from ‘seen in between 1 and 10 patients in a hundred’ to ‘affects less than 1 in 10 people’ |
Figure 6Original and revised heading and subheading structure.
European Public Assessment Report summary screen versions: original (round 3) and revised (round 4)
| Original (round 3) | Revised (round 4) | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Questions | Number of points found /understood | Target met? | Number found/understood | Target met? | |
| 1 | Who has this report been written for? | 4 / 0 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 2 | When is Bondronat used in breast cancer? | 9 / 1 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 3 | What is the purpose of this report? | 6 / 0 | No | 9 / 9 | Yes |
| 4 | What can the tablets do to the food pipe? | 10 / 0 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 5 | Who made the decision about Bondronat described in this report? | 9 / 0 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 6 | What group of medicines does Bondronat belong to? | 5 / 5 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 7 | What did the Committee for Medicinal Products for Human Use (CHMP) decide about Bondronat? | 9 / 8 | Yes | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 8 | The tablets can irritate the food pipe. Which people cannot have the tablets as a result of this? | 10 / 9 | Yes | 9 / 8 | Yes |
| 9 | What two things were weighed up before the decision was made about whether Bondronat should be approved? | 3 / 3 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 10 | How does Bondronat prevent fractures, or broken bones? | 10 / 9 | Yes | 7 / 6 | No |
| 11 | In the studies looking into bone problems or complications, what was looked at to see if Bondronat was working? | 8 / 8 | No | 7 / 7 | No |
| 12 | During the studies into high calcium levels, how many people did the 4 mg dose work in? | 7 / 7 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 13 | How many people receiving a Bondronat infusion got a fever? | 10 / 9 | Yes | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 14 | During the study of bone complications, what was Bondronat compared with? | 10 / 8 | No | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 15 | Suppose you want more information on how the decision was made about Bondronat, what should you do? | 7 / 2 | No | 10 / 9 | Yes |
| 16 | How many people taking the Bondronat tablet got an inflamed food pipe? | 9 / 8 | Yes | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| 17 | In the research studies of high calcium levels in the blood, what was Bondronat compared against? | 7 / 7 | No | 9 / 9 | Yes |
| 18 | When Bondronat was studied in the treatment of bone complications, which group of patients got a new bone problem first? | 6 / 5 | No | 8 / 5 | No |
| 19 | If you are a patient and want more information about Bondronat, what should you do? | 9 / 9 | Yes | 10 / 10 | Yes |
| Total number of passes | 6 | 16 | |||
Changes made in round 3 related to the responses to specific questions
| Questions | Changes made | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Who has this report been written for? | Dedicated subheading ‘Who is this report for” introduced |
| 6 | What group of medicines does Bondronat belong to? | This information, formerly in the section ‘How does Bondronat work’ repositioned in the new subsection ‘What type of medicine is Bondronat’? |
| 9 | What two things were weighed up before the decision was made about whether Bondronat should be approved? | Information bulleted in revised version, to aid finding and understanding |
| 18 | When Bondronat was studied in the treatment of bone complications, which group of patients got a new bone problem first? | Simplified through new subheading of ‘What did the studies show?’ |