Samuel Hailegebreal1, Yosef Haile2, Binyam Tariku Seboka3, Ermias Bekele Enyew4, Tamiru Shibiru5, Zeleke Abebaw Mekonnen6, Shegaw Anagaw Mengiste7. 1. Department of Health Informatics, College of Medicine and Health Science, School of Public Health, Arba Minch University, Arba Minch, Ethiopia. 2. School of Public Health, College of Medicine and Health Sciences, Arba Minch University, Arba Minch, Ethiopia. 3. Department of Health Informatics, College of Medicine and Health Sciences, Dilla University, Dilla, Ethiopia. 4. Department of Health Informatics, Institute of Public Health, Mettu University, Mettu, Ethiopia. 5. School of Medicine, College of Medicine and Health Sciences, Arba Minch University, Arba Minch, Ethiopia. 6. Health System Directorate, Ministry of Health, Addis Ababa, Ethiopia. 7. University of South-Eastern Norway, Kongsberg, Norway.
Abstract
BACKGROUND: The World Health Organization (WHO) encourages breastfeeding to begin within the first hour after birth in order to save children's lives. In Ethiopia, different studies are done on the prevalence and determinants of breastfeeding initiation, up to our knowledge, the spatial distribution and the spatial determinants of breast feeding initiation over time are not investigated. Therefore, the objectives of this study were to assess spatial variation and its spatial determinant of delayed initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia using Geographically Weighted Regression (GWR). METHODS: A cross-sectional study was undertaken using the nationally representative 2016 Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey (EDHS) dataset. Global Moran's I statistic was used to measure whether delayed breastfeeding initiation was dispersed, clustered, or randomly distributed in study area. Ordinary Least Squares (OLS) regression was used to identify factors explaining the geographic variation in delayed breastfeeding initiation. Besides, spatial variability of relationships between dependent and selected predictors was investigated using geographically weighted regression. RESULT: A total weighted sample of 4169 children of aged 0 to 23 months was included in this study. Delayed initiation of breastfeeding was spatially varies across the country with a global Moran's I value of 0.158 at (p-value<0.01). The hotspot (high risk) areas were identified in the Amhara, Afar, and Tigray regions. Orthodox religion, poor wealth index, caesarian section, baby postnatal checkup, and small size of a child at birth were spatially significant factors for delayed breastfeeding initiation in Ethiopia. CONCLUSION: In Ethiopia initiation of breastfeeding varies geographically across region. A significant hotspot was identified in the Amhara, Afar, and Tigray regions. The GWR analysis revealed that orthodox religion, poor wealth index, caesarian section, baby postnatal checkup, and small birth weight were spatially significant factors.
BACKGROUND: The World Health Organization (WHO) encourages breastfeeding to begin within the first hour after birth in order to save children's lives. In Ethiopia, different studies are done on the prevalence and determinants of breastfeeding initiation, up to our knowledge, the spatial distribution and the spatial determinants of breast feeding initiation over time are not investigated. Therefore, the objectives of this study were to assess spatial variation and its spatial determinant of delayed initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia using Geographically Weighted Regression (GWR). METHODS: A cross-sectional study was undertaken using the nationally representative 2016 Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey (EDHS) dataset. Global Moran's I statistic was used to measure whether delayed breastfeeding initiation was dispersed, clustered, or randomly distributed in study area. Ordinary Least Squares (OLS) regression was used to identify factors explaining the geographic variation in delayed breastfeeding initiation. Besides, spatial variability of relationships between dependent and selected predictors was investigated using geographically weighted regression. RESULT: A total weighted sample of 4169 children of aged 0 to 23 months was included in this study. Delayed initiation of breastfeeding was spatially varies across the country with a global Moran's I value of 0.158 at (p-value<0.01). The hotspot (high risk) areas were identified in the Amhara, Afar, and Tigray regions. Orthodox religion, poor wealth index, caesarian section, baby postnatal checkup, and small size of a child at birth were spatially significant factors for delayed breastfeeding initiation in Ethiopia. CONCLUSION: In Ethiopia initiation of breastfeeding varies geographically across region. A significant hotspot was identified in the Amhara, Afar, and Tigray regions. The GWR analysis revealed that orthodox religion, poor wealth index, caesarian section, baby postnatal checkup, and small birth weight were spatially significant factors.
Despite the fact that World Health Organization (WHO) and United Nations International Children’s Emergency Fund (UNICEF) recommend starting breastfeeding within one hour of birth, many babies are not breastfed in the first hour of life [1]. Globally, 78 million babies, or three out of every five, are not breastfed within the first hour of life, leading to an increased risk of death and suffering [2, 3]. Early initiation of breastfeeding (EIBF) is an important pathway for reducing malnutrition and preventing mortality for young children [4, 5] and reducing the risk of postpartum hemorrhage for the mothers [6].Previous studies has shown that newborns who began breastfeeding after the first hour of birth had a 33% higher risk of dying than those who began breastfeeding within the first hour of birth [7]. In low- and middle-income countries (LMICs), the overall prevalence of delayed breastfeeding initiation is 53.8%, ranging from 15.0% in Burundi to 83.4% in Guinea [8]. According to studies conducted in Uganda and Bangladesh, nearly half (48%) and about three-fifths of mothers initiated breastfeeding later than one hour after birth, respectively [9-11]. Findings from the northern part of Ethiopia revealed that 21.2% of newborns delayed breastfeeding initiation [12].Several studies suggest that factors such as religion, wealth index, cesarean delivery, Antenatal care (ANC), maternal complications during pregnancy, a lack of postnatal/neonatal care guidelines at hospitals, home delivery, birth weight, birth order, parity, employment status, child sex, and place of residence parental education are associated with a delay in breast feeding initiation [9-18]. However, breastfeeding initiation have been found to vary across geographical locations [19, 20].Therefore, this study aimed to assess the regional variation and model the spatial determinants of delayed breastfeeding initiation in Ethiopia. The findings of this study may provide insight for authorities, researchers, and health professionals on the country’s delayed initiation of breastfeeding situation, allowing for targeted interventions in areas where delayed initiation of breastfeeding is prevalent.
Methods
Study design, setting and population
A cross-sectional study was undertaken using the nationally representative 2016 Ethiopian Demographic and Health Survey (EDHS) dataset. Ethiopia is located (3°-14°N, 33° – 48°E) in the Horn of Africa. It has 9 regional states (Afar, Amhara, Benishangul-Gumuz, Gambela, Harari, Oromia, Somali, Southern Nations, Nationalities, and People Region (SNNPR), and Tigray regions) and two cities (Addis Ababa and Dire-Dawa) administrations every five years (Fig 1). We used the 2016 EDHS data for this study which was conducted from January 18 2016 to June 27, 2016. In EDHS 2016, a two-stage stratified cluster sampling technique was employed using the 2007 Population and Housing Census (PHC) as a sampling frame. In the first stage, 645 EAs (202 in the urban area) were selected, and in the second stage, on average 28 households were systematically selected. We got the data from the EDHS dataset, which is only available (www.dhsprogram.com) through site requests. For this study, kids data set was used with a total weighted sample of 4169 women who ever breastfeed and who had living children less than 2 years of age. The full EDHS report included the detailed sampling technique [21].
Fig 1
Map of study area, Ethiopia.
Study variables
The outcome variable was delayed initiation of breastfeeding. It is put to the breast within the first hour of birth. It was measured based self-report of the mother and classified as "early" if it began within one hour, and "late /delayed" if it began later than one hour.
Independent variables
The variables were selected based on previous literatures review [22-26]. In this analysis variables were recoded as follow mother’s age (“15–24 years”,“25–34 years”,“35–49 years”), marital status (“married”, “unmarried”), parity (“Primiparous”, “multiparous”, “grand multiparous”), place of residence (“rural”, “urban”), educational status (“no education”, “primary”, “secondary or above”), working status (“not working”, “working”), religion (“orthodox”, “Muslim”, “protestant”, “others”), household wealth (“poor”, “middle”, “richer”), child age (“0–5 months”, “6–11 months”, “12–23 months”), baby post-natal check (“yes”/ “no”), antenatal care (“yes”/“no”), place of birth (“home”, “health facility”), mode of delivery (“caesarean section”, “vaginal”), birth weight (“small”, “average” “large”), birth order (“1–3”,”4–6” and “above 6”), media exposure (“yes”/ “no”) and child sex (“male” “female”).
Data management and statistical analysis
STATA version 14 statistical software was used to execute descriptive analysis. The spatial analysis was carried out with ArcGIS 10.7. The weighted proportions of outcome variable and potential predictor variables were tabulated in STATA and exported to excel before being transferred to ArcGIS 10.7 for further analysis. When a variable has a “missing value,” it should have a response but does not, either because the interviewer accidentally left out the question or because the respondent declined to answer. We remove missing values from our analysis by using the STATA drop command in combination with a logical or conditional statement.
Spatial analysis
ArcGIS V.10.7 software was used for the spatial analysis to determine whether the pattern was clustered, dispersed, or random across the study area [27], and SaTScan V.9.6 software was used for the local cluster analysis. Global Moran’s I is a spatial statistic that measures spatial autocorrelation by taking the entire data set and generating a single output value ranging from -1 to +1. Moran’s, I value close to -1 indicates that delayed breastfeeding initiation is dispersed, whereas Moran’s I close to +1 indicates that delayed breastfeeding initiation is clustered, and Moran’s I close to 0 indicates that delayed breastfeeding initiation is randomly distributed. Moran’s, I value that were statistically significant (p <0.05) had a chance to reject the null hypothesis, indicating the presence of spatial autocorrelation. Using Getis-Ord Gi* statistics, the local spatial analysis was performed to identify specific significant hot spot and cold spot areas.
Spatial regression
Ordinary Least Squares (OLS)
Spatial regression modeling was used to identify predictors of the spatial variation of delayed breastfeeding initiation in study area. OLS is a global statistical model that is used to test and explain the relationship between the dependent and independent variables [28]. The OLS was used as a diagnostic tool as well as to select the appropriate predictors (in terms of their relationship with delayed breastfeeding initiation) for the Geographic Weighted Regression (GWR) model [29]. The Koenker Bp technique was used to see if the model could be used to do a spatially weighted regression analysis. When the Koenker statistics are significant (p-value<0.05), the GWR analysis is examined, which suggests the relationships between the dependent and independent variables change from place to place. The coefficients of explanatory variables in a correctly constructed OLS model should be statistically significant and have either a positive or negative sign. Multicollinearity (VIF<10) was also tested to rule out redundancy among independent variables.
Geographically weighted regression
GWR is a spatial regression technique that uses a regression equation to fit to each feature in a spatial dataset to provide a local model for understanding/predicting from a set of independent variables [30]. So, after that, we used exploratory regression with the appropriate tests to justify the assumptions. The GWR model [31] can be expressed as follows:
where Y are observations of response Y, uv are geographical points (longitude, latitude), β (uv) (k = 0, 1 … p) are p unknown functions of geographic locations, uv, X are explanatory variables at location, uv, i = 1, 2, … n and ∈ are error terms/residuals with zero mean and homogenous variance (σ2). The GWR equation is calibrated using data from nearby features, whereas the OLS equation uses data from all features. Finally, the corrected Akaike Information Criteria (AICc) and adjusted R-squared were used to compare models. The model with the lowest AICc value and the highest adjusted R-squared value was determined to be the best fit for the data.
Result
Characteristics of the respondents and study children
A total weighted sample of 4169 children of aged 0 to 23 months was included in this study. More than half (52%) of the children were females. The majority (58.46%) of the mothers were in the age group of 15–29 years. Most, 1841(44.16%) and 852 (20.45%) of study participants were from Oromia and Southern Nations, Nationalities and Peoples’ Region (SNNPR) respectively. About 1899 (45.55%) and 1409 (33.80%) mothers belong to the poor and rich household index quintiles, respectively (Table 1).
Table 1
Socio-demographic characteristics of respondents and newborns.
Variables
Frequency
Percent (%)
Mother age
15–29
2437
58.46
30–39
1474
35.36
40–49
258
6.18
Religion
Orthodox
1421
34.09
Muslim
1733
41.58
protestant
866
20.77
others
148
3.56
Child sex
Male
2,010
48.22
Female
2,159
51.78
Child age in month
0–5
1182
28.36
6–11
1070
25.67
12–23
1916
45.96
Educational level
No education
2515
60.32
Primary education
1284
30.81
Secondary and above
370
8.88
Wealth index
Poor
1899
45.55
Middle
861
20.65
Rich
1409
33.80
Marital status
Single
138
3.31
Married
4031
96.69
Place of residence
Urban
495
11.87
Rural
3674
88.13
Region
Tigray
307
7.36
Afar
41
0.98
Amhara
769
18.44
Oromia
1841
44.16
Somali
170
4.08
Benishangul
44
1.06
SNNPR
852
20.45
Gambela
10
0.23
Harari
10
0.24
Addis Ababa
107
2.57
Dire dawa
18
0.42
Prevalence of delayed initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopian
In the current study, the overall prevalence of delayed breastfeeding was 24.22% [95% CI: 22.94%, 25.55%]. The highest percentage of delayed breastfeeding was 56% [95% CI: 46%, 66%] seen in the Afar region (Fig 2).
Fig 2
Prevalence of delayed initiation of breastfeeding across regions in Ethiopia, 2016.
Spatial autocorrelation
The spatial distribution of delayed initiation of breastfeeding among children aged 0–23 months showed significant spatial variation across the country with a global Moran’s I value of 0.158 (p-value<0.01) (Fig 3).
Fig 3
The global spatial autocorrelation analysis delayed initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia.
Hot spot (Getis-Ord Gi*) analysis
The statistically significant hotspot (high risk) areas of delayed initiation of breastfeeding were identified in the Amhara, Afar, and Tigray regions. While significant cold spot (low risk) areas were detected in the Eastern SNNPRs, southern and eastern Oromia, Dire Dawa, Harari regions (Fig 4).
Fig 4
Hotspot analysis of delayed initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia, 2016.
Spatial scan statistics
A total of 276 significant clusters were identified using spatial scan analysis. The most likely (primary) clusters were located in Afar, Tigray, Amhara, central Oromia, Addis Ababa, and Benishangul-Gumuz at (14.222399 N, 38.163618 E) / 591.55 km radius. Children aged 0–23 months who lived in the primary cluster were 2.2 times more likely than those who lived outside the window to experience delayed breastfeeding initiation (RR = 2.19, LLR = 107.39, P-value 0.001) (Fig 5).
Fig 5
Most likely (primary) cluster for delayed initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia.
Factors affecting the spatial variation of delayed breastfeeding
Ordinary least square regression
For the candidate explanatory variables, ordinal least squares (OLS) model was fitted. All of the OLS requirements were met in this model. The OLS model was validated to detect multicollinearity among the independent predictors, with a mean VIF of less than 10. The Joint F-statistics and Joint Wald statistic were statistically significant (p<0.01), shows that the model was significant. The model explained 14% of the variation in delayed breastfeeding, rendering to the adjusted R2. The Koenker statistics were statistically significant (p<0.01), indicating a non-stationary between the independent variables and the dependent variable across the study areas. This suggests that GWR should be used because it considers that the relationship between independent and dependent variables is spatially heterogeneous across area (Table 2).
Table 2
Summary of ordinary least squares result.
Variable
Coefficient
Robust standard error
Robust t statistics
Robust probability
VIF
Intercept
0.06
0.020
3.09
< 0.01
------
Orthodox
0.12
0.024
5.05
< 0.01
1.13
Proportion poor
0.17
0.028
6.09
< 0.01
1.27
Proportion of cesarean delivery
0.22
0.079
2.83
< 0.01
1.12
Proportion of baby postnatal checkup
0.13
0.063
2.08
< 0.05
1.09
Proportion of small size at birth
0.20
0.046
4.24
< 0.01
1.08
Ordinary least square regression diagnostics
Number of observation
611
Adjusted R-Squared
0.137
Joint F-Statistic
20.37
Prob(>F), (5,605) degrees of freedom
< 0.01
Joint Wald Statistic:
100.27
Prob(>chi-squared), (5) degrees of freedom
< 0.01
Koenker (BP) Statistic
22.100
Prob(>chi-squared), (5) degrees of freedom
< 0.01
Jarque-Bera Statistic
39.838
Prob(>chi-squared), (2) degrees of freedom
< 0.01
Geographically weighted regression
The global (OLS) regression model revealed that determinants of delayed breastfeeding initiation hot areas. Moreover, OLS implies that the relation between each explanatory variable and the dependent is constant/stationary across the study area; we used GWR to improve the model in cases where the predictors were not stationary. Since, the GWR model has a higher adjusted R2 and a lower Akaike’s Information Criterion (AIC) value than the OLS model, its ability to explain delayed breastfeeding initiation has improved (Table 3). The strength of the relationship with independent variables varies spatially, and variable effects have both positive and negative spatial impacts.
Table 3
Model comparison of OLS and GWR model.
Model comparison
OLS
GWR
Akaike’s Information Criterion (AICc)
-45.49
-89.36
Adjusted R-square
0.14
0.23
In the GWR mode, being orthodox religion, poor wealth index, caesarian section, baby postnatal checkup, and small birth weight were spatially significant factors for delayed breastfeeding initiation in Ethiopia. Being orthodox religion follower had a positive and negative relationship with delayed initiation of breastfeeding with the coefficient ranging from -0.585 to 0.225, implies the effect of association varies across region. As shown in Fig 6, orthodox religion had strong positive predictor of delayed breastfeeding in the Harari, Dire Dawa, Eastern Oromia and Somali Region. On the other hand, the negative and strong relationship between orthodox religion and delayed initiation of breastfeeding was observed in Tigray, Gambela, and the northern part of Amhara (Fig 6).
Fig 6
Geographically weighted regression coefficients for orthodox religion to predict the hotspots of delayed breastfeeding in Ethiopia.
This finding also highlights the spatial variation in relationship between delayed initiation of breastfeeding and wealth index. Being mother from poor wealth status showed a strong and positive relationship with delayed initiation of breastfeeding in the Tigray, Amhara Afar, Southern Somalia, Oromia and Addis Ababa (Fig 7). Moreover, mothers who delivered by caesarian section had a strong and positive relationship with delayed initiation in Tigray, and border of Afar regions (Fig 8).
Fig 7
Poor wealth index geographic weighted regression coefficients to predict delayed breastfeeding in Ethiopia.
Fig 8
Caesarian section geographic weighted regression coefficients to predict delayed breastfeeding in Ethiopia.
As shown in Fig 9 baby receiving a postnatal check also a significant predictor of delayed initiation of breastfeeding. The strong and positive relationship was found in Oromia, SNNPR, Addis Ababa, Southeastern part of Amhara, southwestern part of Afar, and southwestern Somali region (Fig 9).
Fig 9
Baby postnatal checkup geographic weighted regression coefficients to predict delayed breastfeeding in Ethiopia.
Furthermore, being small birth weight at birth was spatial predictor of delayed initiation of breastfeeding in eastern Somali region, southern and eastern parts of Afar, Dire Dawa, and Harari (Fig 10).
Fig 10
Small size at birth geographic weighted regression coefficients to predict delayed breastfeeding in Ethiopia.
Discussion
This study aimed to explore the spatial clustering and spatial determinants of delayed initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia. This study revealed, the overall prevalence of delayed breastfeeding was 24.22% [95% CI: 22.94%, 25.55%]. This finding was lower than a study conducted in Uganda [10], Bangladesh [32], Ethiopia [23], and South Sudan [14]. These disparities could be explained by differences in study participants’ health-care utilization, culture, and socioeconomic status. Across region highest and the lowest proportion of delayed breastfeeding was seen in the Afar and Dire Dawa region respectively. The findings were similar to the spatial analysis conducted in this study and previous study [33]. The possible reason might be mothers from the metropolitan area may have a higher level of education and have better access to breastfeeding knowledge. Besides, residents of metropolitan cities are completely urbanized. This makes media, health services, and health education more accessible. The improved infrastructure in metropolitan areas has a positive impact on access to health services [34].Delayed initiation of breastfeeding spatially varies across the country with a global Moran’s I value of 0.158 at (p-value<0.01). The hotspot areas were identified in the Amhara, Afar, and Tigray regions. Whereas, cold spot (low risk) areas were detected in the Eastern SNNPR, southern and eastern Oromia, Dire Dawa, Harari regions. This could be attributed to the fact that cultural variation, campaigns promoting baby formula, variation in health service utilization across the regions [24, 33, 35, 36]. The discrepancy could be due to project implementation differences, such as the fact because Ethiopia’s northern regions are the most unstable during the time of instability transition, which could disrupt the implementation of mother and child health initiatives [37]. Furthermore, during the survey periods, drought and starvation in the northern part of the country may have contributed to the poor breast feeding in northern Ethiopia.The local GWR analysis revealed that, being orthodox follower, poor wealth index, caesarian section, baby postnatal checkup, and small birth weight were spatially significant factors for delayed breastfeeding initiation in Ethiopia. In this study, poor household wealth status was found to be a geographically statistically significant predictive variable for breastfeeding initiation. Poor wealth index status had coefficients ranging from -0.175 to 0.318, with negative and positive strong relationships in different geographic locations. In Tigray, Amhara Afar, Southern Somali, Oromia, and Addis Ababa, it highly predicts the occurrence of late breastfeeding initiation. This could be attributable to a variety of factors, including differences in media access, lack of knowledge about the time to initiate breastfeeding, and the availability of health resources [38-41].Similarly, caesarian section is a key spatial predictor of hotspots of delayed breastfeeding initiation across the region. Its strong and positive relationship with delayed initiation in Tigray, and border of Afar regions, whereas moderate and positive relationship in Oromia, SNNPR, Addis Ababa, Gambela, Amhara, central and southwest part of Afar. According to studies, the hospital practice of isolating infants from their mothers after caesarian section could explain and this could also be due to the mother’s fatigue and pain following the birth [38, 42–44].The baby receiving a postnatal check also strong and positive relationship was found in Oromia, SNNPR, Addis Ababa, Southeastern of Amhara, southwestern of Afar, and southwestern Somali region. As showed in Fig 9 children with small birth weight was strong predictor of delayed initiation of breastfeeding in eastern Somali region, southern and eastern parts of Afar. This finding could be explained by poor health personnel awareness that babies born with low birth weight should have skin-to-skin contact with their mothers to get early breastfeeding and avoid hypothermia [33, 45]. In addition, small sized neonate has worse suction ability breast seeking reflex and deglutition-respiration cycle [46, 47].The strength of this study was using huge, nationally representative dataset, resulting in acceptable statistical power. Furthermore, the use of spatial and SaTScan based cluster analyses assisted in the detection of statistically significant high-risk clusters/hotspots of delayed breastfeeding initiation. A standard questionnaire was also used in the survey, which may have reduced the effect of measurement bias. As limitation, the location data values were relocated 1–2 km for urban areas and 5 km for rural areas this may have an impact on the precise location of instances. We removed 34 clusters from the analysis because they lacked coordinated data, which may have influenced the estimated result. Besides, the cross-sectional nature of the study, we are unable to show the cause and effect relationship between dependent and independent variables and the survey replies may be disposed to a recall bias.
Conclusion
In Ethiopia initiation of breastfeeding varies geographically across regions. A significant hotspot was identified in the Amhara, Afar, and Tigray regions. In GWR analysis orthodox religion, poor wealth index, caesarian section, baby postnatal checkup, and small size of a child at birth were spatially significant factors. Therefore, policymakers and health planners better to design an effective intervention program at hotspot regions and it is strongly essential that religious leaders educate women about early breastfeeding initiation.10 Mar 2022
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Modeling spatial determinates of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysis
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear,The article is very well described and with robust analyses. But it would be interesting to insert a map in the methods describing the study area, identifying the locations geographically.In figure 1, include the name of the "Y" axis with the unit of measurement (%).Answer the question. What was the radius used to identify the Hot Spots? Include in methods.Reviewer #2: This an interesting study on the spatial distribution and determinants of breastfeeding initiation in Ethiopia, using nationwide data from the 2016 Demographic and Health Survey. Although the manuscript presents robust spatial analyses and potential for publication, some points must be addressed and clarified:The authors must present a more suitable Data Availability statement. Since the study used publicly available data from DHS, this statement may apply: “The data underlying the results presented in the study are available from (include the name of the third party and contact information or URL)”.The manuscript is generally well written, but some English revision is needed to increase readability and correct typographical or grammatical errors.Line 1: in the title and short title, please correct the typo “determinates” replacing it by “determinants”.Line 34: In the abstract’s methods, please describe Global Moran's I.Line 36-38: If possible, please present the GWR coefficient variation and respective confidential intervals or p-values for each of the risk factors associated with delayed breastfeeding initiation.Please define the abbreviations when they first appear in the text: GRW (line 40), UNICEF (line 45), and ANC (line 60).Lines 48-50: The two sentences could be better connected. Consider saying instead: “Early initiation of breastfeeding (EIBF) is an important pathway for reducing malnutrition and preventing mortality for young children (4,5) and reducing the risk of postpartum hemorrhage for the mothers (6)”.Lines 51-52: Same content was said in the first sentence of the introduction. Please remove this sentence.Lines 74-75: The authors mention nine region states and two municipalities where EDHS data were collected from. Were EDHS data representative of these regions and municipalities?The authors must describe the study population and any inclusion or exclusion criteria applied in its selection. For example, children’s age range (0 to 23 months). This information must be described along with the study design section, which could be renamed “study design, setting and population”.Line 81-83: Better description of the study variables is needed. Please provide more details on the collection of data on breastfeeding after birth. Also, explain why/how the independent variables were chosen, and how they were analyzed (categorical/numerical). If categorical, please specify each variable’s categories between parentheses. What do you mean by post-natal checkup? Please describe the variables considered in the household wealth index.Line 93-95: What kind of spatial data were used in this analysis? Individual-level geocode data?Line 98: Please correct: “Moran’s I value close to -1 indicates…”How did the authors manage missing data? How were selected the final OLS and GWR models for the determinants of spatial variation in delayed breastfeeding initiation? AIC? Please clarify these points in the statistical analysis section.Line 133: Specify the prevalence between parentheses.Table 1: Please review the table’s title. Child sex is missing. Make clearer which variables are related to the mother and which ones are related to the child.Table 2: What are the 611 observations? Clusters? If so, how did you arrived at this number of clusters? Make sure to clarify that in the results section when describing this OLR results. In addition, only important statistics must be kept in the table which in turn must be clear and self-explanatory.Table 3: Define ACCs.Line 247-250: As limitations, the authors must consider including the cross-sectional nature of the study; risk of recall bias regarding the breastfeeding initiation after birth, for example, almost half (46%) of the children were aged 12-23 months at the moment of the study.In general, the discussion is very simplistic relying most in the description of the results. A major revision of this section must consider the contextualization of the results with the topic literature and the characteristics of the regions. A short description of the main regions, including demographic, socioeconomic, level of development (HDI), and prenatal and birth healthcare information, may help the authors to discuss the findings and clarify them to the broader readership.********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public.Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: NoReviewer #2: No[NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.]While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.20 Apr 2022To: PLOS ONEFrom: Samuel HailegebrealSubject: A letter Accompanying Revision in Response to Editors and Reviewer CommentsDear EditorsThe authors would like to thank the editorial team and team of reviewers for constructive and valuable comments. The authors are very happy to submit the revised version of the manuscript entitled “Modeling spatial determinants of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysis” for its publication in your Journal. The comments of the editors and the reviewers were highly insightful and enabled us to greatly improve the quality of our manuscript. In this revised manuscript we made substantial changes to address your concerns in a point-by-point response. We are very keen to incorporate further comments, if any, for the betterment of the final manuscript.Point by Point Response to - Editor CommentsWe note that Figures 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 and 9 in your submission contain copyrighted images. All PLOS content is published under the Creative Commons Attribution License (CC BY 4.0), which means that the manuscript, images, and Supporting Information files will be freely available online, and any third party is permitted to access, download, copy, distribute, and use these materials in any way, even commercially, with proper attribution. For more information, see our copyright guidelines: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/licenses-and-copyright.Authors’ response: Thank you editor for the concern. The figure in our manuscript including Figure.1 in the revised manuscript is not copyrighted rather we have done using ArcGIS and SaTScan software based on the shapefile of Ethiopia received from Ethiopian Central Statistical Agency (CSA) by explaining the purpose of the study and GPS data (longitude and latitude) from measure DHS program by explaining the objective of the study through online requesting and allow us to access the shapefile and GPS data. Now we cite the source of the shapefile since it is needed to explore the spatial distribution of home delivery. Therefore, the maps presented in our study are not copyrighted rather it was our spatial analysis result.Point by Point Response to ReviewersReviewer #11. The article is very well described and with robust analyses. But it would be interesting to insert a map in the methods describing the study area, identifying the locations geographically.Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your great effort for the betterment of our work. We accepted your comments and modified accordingly.Figure.1 Map of study area, Ethiopia2. In figure 1, include the name of the "Y" axis with the unit of measurement (%).Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your great effort for the betterment of our work. We accepted your comments and modified accordingly.Figure .2 prevalence of delayed initiation of breastfeeding across regions in Ethiopia, 2016.3. Answer the question. What was the radius used to identify the Hot Spots? Include in methodsAuthors’ response: Incremental spatial autocorrelation is a series of line graphs and their corresponding z-scores. The Z-score reflected the strength of clustering, and the peak was statistically significant which indicated where the spatial processes were promoted sound clustering. This tool can help you select an appropriate Distance Threshold or Radius for tools that have these parameters, such as hot spot analysis. Totally 10 distance bands were detected by a beginning distance of 121751 m, and first maximum peak (clustering) was observed at 196765.52 as shown below.Reviewer #2:1. This an interesting study on the spatial distribution and determinants of breastfeeding initiation in Ethiopia, using nationwide data from the 2016 Demographic and Health Survey. Although the manuscript presents robust spatial analyses and potential for publication, some points must be addressed and clarified:Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your great effort for the betterment of our work. We accepted your comments and modified accordingly.2. The authors must present a more suitable Data Availability statement. Since the study used publicly available data from DHS, this statement may apply: “The data underlying the results presented in the study are available from (include the name of the third party and contact information or URL)”Authors’ response: Availability of data and materials: The datasets analyzed during the current study are available from the DHS data set is available online and anyone can access it from (https://dhsprogram.com/data/available-datasets)3. The manuscript is generally well written, but some English revision is needed to increase readability and correct typographical or grammatical errors.Authors’ response: thank you for your comment we edited type/grammatical error4. Line 1: in the title and short title, please correct the typo “determinates” replacing it by “determinants”.Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your comment “Modeling spatial determinants of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysis”5. In the abstract’s methods, please describe Global Moran's I.Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your comment “Global Moran’s I statistic was used to measure whether delayed breastfeeding initiation was dispersed, clustered, or randomly distributed in study area.6. If possible, please present the GWR coefficient variation and respective confidential intervals or p-values for each of the risk factors associated with delayed breastfeeding initiation.Authors’ response: we thanks reviewer it’s possible to write the coefficient but we hope GWR map better to express the coefficient b/c most significant predictor had low coefficient(strong negative) and strong positive if we write the coefficient may mislead readers. The assumption of significance also found in our table.7. Please define the abbreviations when they first appear in the text: GRW (line 40), UNICEF (line 45), and ANC (line 60).Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your great effort for the betterment of our work. We accepted your comments and modified accordingly (see revised manuscript)8. Lines 48-50: The two sentences could be better connected. Consider saying instead: “Early initiation of breastfeeding (EIBF) is an important pathway for reducing malnutrition and preventing mortality for young children (4,5) and reducing the risk of postpartum hemorrhage for the mothers (6)”.Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your great effort for the betterment of our work. We accepted your comments and modified accordingly (see revised manuscript)9. Lines 51-52: Same content was said in the first sentence of the introduction. Please remove this sentence.Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your comment. We accepted your comments and modified accordingly (see revised manuscript)10. Lines 74-75: The authors mention nine region states and two municipalities where EDHS data were collected from. Were EDHS data representative of these regions and municipalities?Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for your comment. Ethiopia is located (3o-14oN, 33o – 48°E) in the Horn of Africa. It has 9 Regional states (Afar, Amhara, Benishangul-Gumuz, Gambela, Harari, Oromia, Somali, and Southern Nations, Nationalities, and People Region (SNNPR), and Tigray regions) and two cities (Addis Ababa and Dire-Dawa) administrations every five years (Fig.1). We used the 2016 EDHS data for this study which was conducted from January 18 2016 to June 27, 2016. In EDHS 2016, a two-stage stratified cluster sampling technique was employed using the 2007 Population and Housing Census (PHC) as a sampling frame. In the first stage, 645 EAs (202 in the urban area) were selected, and in the second stage, on average 28 households were systematically selected. We got the data from the EDHS dataset, which is only available (www.dhsprogram.com) through site requests(see revised manuscript).11. The authors must describe the study population and any inclusion or exclusion criteria applied in its selection. For example, children’s age range (0 to 23 months). This information must be described along with the study design section, which could be renamed “study design, setting and population”.Authors’ response: we thank the reviewer comment. For this study, kids data set was used with a total weighted sample of 4169 women who ever breastfeed and who had living children less than 2 years of age (see revised manuscript)12. Line 81-83: Better description of the study variables is needed. Please provide more details on the collection of data on breastfeeding after birth. Also, explain why/how the independent variables were chosen, and how they were analyzed (categorical/numerical). If categorical, please specify each variable’s categories between parentheses. What do you mean by post-natal checkup? Please describe the variables considered in the household wealth index.Authors’ response: we thanks the reviewer for insight comment revised accordinglyStudy variablesThe outcome variable was delayed initiation of breastfeeding. It is put to the breast within the first hour of birth. It was measured based self-report of the mother and classified as "early" if it began within one hour, and "late /delayed" if it began later than one hour.Independent variablesThe variables were selected based on previous literatures review (22–24,24–26). In this analysis variables were recoded as follow mother’s age (“15–24 years”, “25–34 years”, “35–49 years”), marital status (“married”, “unmarried”), parity (“Primiparous”, “multiparous”, “grand multiparous”), place of residence (“rural” or “urban”), educational status(“no education”, “primary”, “secondary or above”), working status (“not working” or “working”), religion (“orthodox”, “Muslim”, “protestant”, “others” ), household wealth (“poor”, “middle”, “richer”), child age (“0–5 months”, “6–11 months”, “12–23 months”), baby post-natal check (“yes”/ “no”), antenatal care (“yes”, “no”), place of birth (“home” or “health facility”), mode of delivery (“caesarean section” or “vaginal”), birth weight (“small”, “average” “large”), birth order (“1-3”,”4-6” and “above 6”), media exposure (“yes”/ “no”) and child sex (“male” “female”).13. Line 93-95: What kind of spatial data were used in this analysis? Individual-level geocode data?Authors’ response: The DHS program randomly displaced the GPS latitude/longitude positions (up to 2kms for urban and up to 5kms for rural clusters) for all DHS. Consequently, this study does not show the exact location of delayed breast feeding initiation in the study area.14. Line 98: Please correct: “Moran’s I value close to -1 indicates…”Authors’ response: corrected “Moran’s, I value close to -1 indicates that delayed breastfeeding initiation is dispersed, whereas Moran's I close to +1 indicates that delayed breastfeeding initiation is clustered, and Moran's I close to 0 indicates that delayed breastfeeding initiation is randomly distributed.”15. How did the authors manage missing data? How were selected the final OLS and GWR models for the determinants of spatial variation in delayed breastfeeding initiation? AIC? Please clarify these points in the statistical analysis section.Authors’ response: Features that contain missing values in the dependent or explanatory variables will be excluded from the analysis; however, you can use the Fill Missing Values tool to complete the dataset before running GWR. Replaces missing (null) values with estimated values based on spatial neighbors, space-time neighbors, or time-series values. But in this case no missing value observed.Model selection- The Koenker Bp technique was used to see if the model could be used to do a spatially weighted regression analysis. When the Koenker statistics are significant (p-value<0.05), the GWR analysis is examined, which suggests the relationships between the dependent and independent variables change from place to place. The coefficients of explanatory variables in a correctly constructed OLS model should be statistically significant and have either a positive or negative sign. Multicollinearity (VIF<10) was also tested to rule out redundancy among independent variables.The GWR equation is calibrated using data from nearby features, whereas the OLS equation uses data from all features. Finally, the corrected Akaike Information Criteria (AICc) and adjusted R-squared were used to compare models. The model with the lowest AICc value and the highest adjusted R-squared value was determined to be the best fit for the data.16. Line 133: Specify the prevalence between parentheses.Authors’ response: In the current study, the overall prevalence of delayed breastfeeding was 24.22 % [95 % CI: 22.94%, 25.55%]. The highest percentage of delayed breastfeeding was 56% [95% CI: 46%, 66%] seen in the Afar region (Fig.2).17. Table 1: Please review the table’s title. Child sex is missing. Make clearer which variables are related to the mother and which ones are related to the child.Authors’ response: we modified in the revised manuscript and also include child sex in the table (see the revised manuscript).18. Table 2: What are the 611 observations? Clusters? If so, how did you arrived at this number of clusters? Make sure to clarify that in the results section when describing this OLR results. In addition, only important statistics must be kept in the table which in turn must be clear and self-explanatory.Authors’ response: We appreciate the reviewer's insightful feedback. Clusters were marked by 611. Only 611 of the 645 EDHS for this analysis have spatial coordination (latitude/longitude). Here is found in limitation section in revised manuscript “As limitation, the location data values were relocated 1–2 km for urban areas and 5 km for rural areas this may have an impact on the precise location of instances. We removed 34 clusters from the analysis because they lacked coordinated data, which may have influenced the estimated result”19. Table 3: Define ACCs.Authors’ response: Akaike’s Information Criterion (AICc)20. Line 247-250: As limitations, the authors must consider including the cross-sectional nature of the study; risk of recall bias regarding the breastfeeding initiation after birth, for example, almost half (46%) of the children were aged 12-23 months at the moment of the study.Authors’ response: The study's strength is that it employed data from a large, nationally representative dataset, resulting in acceptable statistical power. Furthermore, the use of GIS and Sat Scan statistical analyses assisted in the detection of statistically significant high-risk clusters/hotspots of delayed breastfeeding initiation. A standard questionnaire was also used in the survey, which may have reduced the effect of measurement bias. As limitation, the location data values were relocated 1–2 km for urban areas and 5 km for rural areas this may have an impact on the precise location of instances. We removed 34 clusters from the analysis because they lacked coordinated data, which may have influenced the estimated result. Besides, the cross-sectional nature of the study, we are unable to show the cause and effect relationship between dependent and independent variables and the survey replies may be disposed to a recall bias.21. In general, the discussion is very simplistic relying most in the description of the results. A major revision of this section must consider the contextualization of the results with the topic literature and the characteristics of the regions. A short description of the main regions, including demographic, socioeconomic, level of development (HDI), and prenatal and birth healthcare information, may help the authors to discuss the findings and clarify them to the broader readership.Authors’ response: The author thanks reviewer comment. We modified our discussion parts (see the revised manuscript)Submitted filename: Point by point respons.docxClick here for additional data file.14 Jul 2022
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Modeling spatial determinants of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysis
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15 Jul 2022To: PLOS ONEFrom: Samuel HailegebrealSubject: A letter Accompanying Revision in Response to Editors and Reviewer CommentsDear EditorsThe authors would like to thank the editorial team and team of reviewers for constructive and valuable comments. The authors are very happy to submit the second revised version of the manuscript entitled “Modeling spatial determinants of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysis” for its publication in your Journal. The comments of the editors and the reviewers were highly insightful and enabled us to greatly improve the quality of our manuscript. In this second revision manuscript we made substantial changes to address your concerns in a point-by-point response. We are very keen to incorporate further comments, if any, for the betterment of the final manuscript.Point by Point Response to - Editor CommentsPoint by Point Response to ReviewersPlease review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.Author response: thank you for your comment. We author updated reverence no 1, 2, 3, 27, 28 in the revised manuscriptReviewer #11. It is not clear if the authors used the “fill missing value” tool to complete the dataset with estimated values or if they just excluded the observations with missing value in any of the study variables. In the section “Data management and Statistical analysis”, please clarify how you handled missing data.Authors’ response: Thank you for your input. A variable with a "missing value" should have a response but does not because the question was not asked (due to interviewer error) or the responder did not want to answer. We use the STATA drop command in conjunction with a logical / conditional expression to remove missing values from our analysis.2. Do you really need all those statistics in table 2 in order to interpret the results? Please leave in the table only the essential statistics.Authors’ response: Thank you for the comment we accept and corrected in the revised versionVariable Coefficient Robust standard error Robust t statistics Robust probability VIFIntercept 0.06 0.020 3.09 < 0.01 ------Orthodox 0.12 0.024 5.05 < 0.01 1.13Proportion poor 0.17 0.028 6.09 < 0.01 1.27Proportion of cesarean delivery 0.22 0.079 2.83 < 0.01 1.12Proportion of baby postnatal checkup 0.13 0.063 2.08 < 0.05 1.09Proportion of small size at birth 0.20 0.046 4.24 < 0.01 1.08Ordinary least square regression diagnosticsNumber of Observations: 611 Adjusted R-Squared 0.137Joint F-Statistic 20.37 Prob(>F), (5,605) degrees of freedom < 0.01Joint Wald Statistic: 100.27 Prob(>chi-squared), (5) degrees of freedom < 0.01Koenker (BP) Statistic 22.100 Prob(>chi-squared), (5) degrees of freedom < 0.01Jarque-Bera Statistic 39.838 Prob(>chi-squared), (2) degrees of freedom < 0.01Submitted filename: Point by point respons.docxClick here for additional data file.11 Aug 2022
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Modeling spatial determinants of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysis
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11 Aug 20221. In response to reviewer #2's comment on missing values (see below), you have provided an explanation in the response letter but you have not included this explanation in the "Date management and statistical analysis" section of the Methods. Please could you ensure that you update this section accordingly and then resubmit?Author response: When a variable has a "missing value," it should have a response but does not, either because the interviewer accidentally left out the question or because the respondent declined to answer. We remove missing values from our analysis by using the STATA drop command in combination with a logical or conditional statement.Submitted filename: Point by point respons.docxClick here for additional data file.16 Aug 2022Modeling spatial determinants of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysisPONE-D-22-01403R3Dear Dr. Hailegebreal,We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication.An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org.If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org.Kind regards,James MockridgeStaff EditorPLOS ONE2 Sep 2022PONE-D-22-01403R3Modeling spatial determinants of initiation of breastfeeding in Ethiopia: A geographically weighted regression analysisDear Dr. Hailegebreal:I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department.If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org.If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org.Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access.Kind regards,PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staffon behalf ofDr James MockridgeStaff EditorPLOS ONE
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