Long-term health-related quality of life, healthcare utilisation and back-to-work activities in intensive care unit survivors: Prospective confirmatory study from the Frisian aftercare cohort.

PURPOSE: More substantial information on recovery after Intensive Care Unit (ICU) admission is urgently needed. In a previous retrospective study, the proportion of non-recovery patients was 44%. The aim of this prospective follow-up study was to evaluate changes in Health-Related Quality of Life (HRQoL) in the first year after ICU-admission.
METHODS: Long-stay adult ICU-patients (≥ 48 hours) were included. HRQoL was evaluated with the Dutch translation of the RAND-36 item Health Survey (RAND-36) at baseline via proxy measurement, and at three, six, and twelve months after ICU admission. Subsequently, the relation between physical functioning, healthcare utilisation, and work activities was explored.
RESULTS: A total of 81 patients were included in this study. Fifty-five percent of patients did not meet criteria for full recovery and were allocated to the Non Recovery (NR)-group (Physical Functioning domain-score: 35 [15-55]). Baseline physical HRQoL differed significantly between the Recovery (R) and NR-group. Patients in the NR-group received home care more often and had higher healthcare utilisation (44 versus 17% in the first three months post-ICU, p = 0.013). Only fourteen percent of NR-patients were able to participate in work activities. Moreover, NR-patients persistently showed impaired overall HRQoL throughout the year after critical illness.
CONCLUSIONS: Limited recovery in ICU survivors is reflected in overall impaired HRQoL, as well as in far-reaching consequences for patients' healthcare needs and their ability to reintegrate into society. In our study, baseline HRQoL appeared to be an important predictor of long-term outcomes, but not Clinical Frailty Scale (CFS) score. And, (proxy-derived) HRQoL may help to identify patients at risk of long-term non-recovery.

Introduction

The primary aim of Intensive Care Unit (ICU) treatment is to improve the chance of survival for critically ill patients. Over the last few decades, enhanced treatment options and advanced technologies have resulted in an increased number of ICU survivors [1-3]. Despite this success, evaluation of patient-centred outcomes, commonly assessed by HRQoL scores, has revealed substantial proportions of survivors experiencing persistent physical, mental, and cognitive health problems [3-5]. Previous research in this population has indicated a large proportion of ICU patients suffer from long-term limitations in physical functioning in the first year after admission [6]. Therefore, using physical functioning as a marker for recovery in HRQoL may provide researchers and clinicians with more information on overall vulnerability in the post-ICU period.

Although critical care research has embraced the need for more robust information regarding ICU recovery, long-term follow-up of ICU patients has been burdened with high loss to follow-up, heterogeneity of results, and a lack of uniform methodology. Further, assessing the impact of critical illness is complicated in the acute setting, in particular due to the lack of baseline information regarding preadmission health status. Additionally, there is a need for more evidence regarding the impact of long-term health problems on the ability to participate in work activities, as well as on healthcare utilisation. Information regarding healthcare utilisation is often predominantly focussed on the amount of hospital and ICU readmissions [7]. However, more in-depth information regarding the use of physical therapy, dietary consultations, and home care, among others, is limited.

In this study, the primary aim was to prospectively confirm percentages of non-recovery (NR) patients at twelve months after ICU admission. Additionally, we aimed to obtain a highly detailed follow-up, including baseline HRQoL, the effect of NR on health-care utilisation and back-to-work activities.

Material and methods

Study design and population

This prospective, single-centre, observational study was performed in a tertiary teaching hospital with a mixed ICU, located in Leeuwarden, the Netherlands. The ICU is an 18-bed mixed medical-surgical unit that admits close to 1500 patients a year, with close to half of these admissions following elective surgery [8].

All adult patients admitted to the ICU between May 20 and November 27 of 2019, with a length of stay (LOS) ICU of ≥ 48 hours, who were able to read and understand the Dutch language, were included in this study. The cut-off value on LOS ICU of 48 hours was used as a large proportion of patients in this ICU ward with a shorter LOS are admitted per protocol and will be discharged within two days without mayor complications. It is commonly known that these patients have a lower risk of long-term health problems. Sample size was based on the average number of long-stay patients admitted to the local ICU ward in six months due to the explorative nature of this study. The follow-up measurements were conducted throughout the first year after ICU admission. Participating patients who did not survive until the one year follow-up, did not complete the end-of-study HRQoL measurement, or were lost to follow-up were excluded from analysis.

This study, including a deferred consent procedure for patients that were not able to provide consent at baseline, has been evaluated and approved by the local research ethics committee of the Medical Centre Leeuwarden (Regionale Toetsingscommissie Patiëntgebonden Onderzoek, Leeuwarden, The Netherlands; METC-number: RTPO 1055). The study protocol was registered online (ClinicalTrials.gov identifier: NCT04154995). All patients provided written informed consent. A deferred consent procedure was instated to make sure baseline measurements could be performed if the patient was unable to give consent due to, for instance, sedation or delirium. When clinical evaluation showed that the patient was able to give an informed response, official consent was obtained. As a consequence, patients with severe cognitive problems after awakening, e.g. postanoxic coma, or with inevitable ICU mortality were excluded.

Data collection

At baseline (LOS ICU ≤72h), a proxy of the patient was asked to complete the RAND-36, in order to evaluate the patient’s HRQoL prior to ICU admission [9]. This questionnaire, which is very similar to the Medical Outcome Study Short-Form-36 (MOS SF-36), consists of nine domains, as described in the previously conducted retrospective study [10]. Higher scores indicate better subjective health status. Patients were asked to complete the RAND-36 again at three, six and twelve months after ICU admission. In line with the previously applied identification method, all patients with a physical functioning (PF) domain score below age-adjusted reference value -based on a Dutch healthy control of 65–75 years old group at twelve months- were allocated to the physical NR-group [6, 11]. Patients with higher scores were assigned to the recovery (R) group. Additional survey information about work activities and healthcare utilisation were obtained. In case of non-response, patients were reminded via e-mail or telephone. When a hospital visit deemed not to be feasible, a researcher visited the patient at their home or rehabilitation environment. If applicable, the questionnaire was completed verbally with the assistance of a researcher.

Baseline and ICU characteristics were collected as standard care and retrieved from electronic patient data files. Medical comorbidities were indicated as stated in the National Intensive Care Evaluation [12]. The clinical frailty scale (CFS), consisting of one domain with a score range of one for ‘Very fit’ to nine for ‘Terminally ill’, was used to evaluate pre-admission physical performance and independence [13].

Statistical analysis

After study completion, data were processed in a coded file in January 2021. After taking into account the sample size of the study, variables were summarised as median [interquartile range, IQR] and frequencies (percentage). Differences between the R-group and NR-group, both at baseline and during the first year after admission, were assessed per predefined protocol using appropriate statistical tests. P-values were estimated by using the Mann-Whitney U test, the two-sided Fisher’s Exact test in case of dichotomous data, or the Pearson Chi-Squared test in case of categorical variables within more than 2 groups. Repeated measures in the R-group and NR-group were tested using Friedman’s test. In case of statistical significance, post-hoc analysis using a Wilcoxon signed-rank test was conducted with a Bonferroni correction. A two-sided p-value <0.05 was considered as statistically significant, or p<0.008 after Bonferroni correction. SPSS Statistics for Windows, Version 27 (IBM) and GraphPad Prism version 5.0.4. for Windows (Graphpad Software) were used for statistical testing and visualisation of the data. RAND-36 domain score outcomes were displayed visually using Microsoft Excel (Microsoft Corporation). Results of this study were reported using the Strengthening the Reporting of Observational Studies (STROBE) checklist [10].

Bias and missing data

Missing data due to either early mortality, severe cognitive impairments, or other reasons for loss to follow-up, are common in critical care research, and might be associated with disease burden and lack of recovery. To limit potential bias, baseline characteristics of the study population and patients of which no completed RAND-36 could be obtained at the end of the study, were compared and reported in the S1 Table.

Results

Patient selection and group allocation

Between May and November 2019, 107 patients were screened for eligibility, of whom 81 patients gave informed consent for this study. At twelve months, 65 patients completed the RAND-36 questionnaire and were consequently included in the analysis (Fig 1). Thirty-six patients (55%) were allocated to the NR-group with a median physical functioning (PF)-domain score at twelve months of 35 [15-55]. Twenty-nine patients (45%) were added to the R-group (median PF-domain score at twelve months: 95 [83-95]).

Fig 1

Flowchart study inclusion and group allocation.

Comparison of group characteristics

In this study population, 25% was female and the median age of the group was 66 [57-74] years. Patients were managing well in daily life prior to admission (CFS: 3 [2-4]). The majority of admission types was medical (52%) and the median LOS ICU was 5 [4-10] days (Table 1). Patients in the physical NR-group were older, were more frail, had a higher LOS ICU, and were in need of mechanical ventilation for a longer period of time.

Table 1

Comparison of group characteristics at baseline and after ICU admission.

Characteristics	All	NR at 12m	R at 12m	p-value
	N = 65	N = 36 (55%)	N = 29 (45%)
Pre-ICU
Frailty (CFS) (1–9)	3 [2–4]	3 [3–4]	2 [1–3]	0.001
Baseline HRQoL (0–100)
Physical functioning	65 [45–95]	55 [29–81]	95 [65–100]	<0.001
Social functioning	88 [63–100]	88 [50–100]	88 [63–100]	0.132
Role physical	50 [0–100]	25 [0–81]	100 [25–100]	0.011
Role emotional	100 [67–100]	100 [67–100]	100 [83–100]	0.602
Mental health	88 [68–96]	82 [67–93]	88 [72–96]	0.204
Energy/Fatigue	70 [40–80]	58 [35–75]	70 [60–85]	0.017
Bodily pain	78 [55–100]	71 [43–100]	88 [68–100]	0.049
General health perception	60 [44–85]	50 [30–75]	70 [50–90]	0.003
Health change	50 [25–50]	25 [19–50]	50 [25–50]	0.19
Demographic factors
Female, n (%)	16 (25)	12 (33)	4 (14)	0.087
Age	66 [57–74]	71 [62–77]	63 [50–73]	0.038
BMI (kg/m2)	27 [24–31]	28 [24–31]	27 [23–29]	0.172
APACHE III	76 [58–97]	79 [61–94]	75 [55–99]	0.428
Comorbidities
Malignancy, n (%)	6 (9)	3 (8)	3 (10)	1.000
Diabetes, n (%)	11 (17)	9 (25)	2 (7)	0.094
COPD, n (%)	8 (12)	7 (19)	1 (3)	0.066
CVA, n (%)	6 (9)	3 (8)	3 (10)	1.000
CKD, n (%)	6 (9)	5 (14)	1 (3)	0.213
Multicomorbiditya, n (%)	7 (11)	6 (17)	1 (3)	0.120
Psychiatric history, n (%)	15 (23)	10 (28)	5 (17)	0.384
Aetiology
Admission, n (%)
Medical	34 (52)	16 (44)	18 (62)	0.326
Elective surgical	16 (25)	11 (31)	5 (17)
Acute surgical	15 (23)	9 (25)	6 (21)
Sepsis, n (%)	14 (22)	11 (31)	3 (10)	0.069
CPR, n (%)	10 (15)	3 (8)	7 (24)	0.096
Delirium, n (%)	24 (37)	13 (36)	11 (38)	1.000
ICU morbidity
LOS ICU	5 [4–10]	7 [4–15]	4 [3–8]	0.006
Mechanical ventilation (days)	3 [1–6]	4 [2–10]	2 [1–4]	0.009
Renal replacement therapy	11 (17)	7 (19)	4 (14)	0.742

Abbreviations: BMI, Body Mass Index; APACHE, Acute Physiology and Chronic Health Evaluation; CFS, Clinical Frailty Scale; COPD, Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease; CVA, Cerebrovascular Accident; CKD, Chronic Kidney Disease; CPR, Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation; LOS, Length of Stay; ICU, Intensive Care Unit

amulticomorbidity was indicated as at least two medical comorbidities at baseline

Baseline HRQoL and frailty

In the three months before ICU-admission, patients allocated to the NR-group scored significantly lower on physical HRQoL domains (Physical functioning, Role physical, Energy/Fatigue, Bodily pain) and general health perception (Table 1). In addition, these patients were more frail before ICU-admission (CFS 2 versus 3, with score 2 indicating ‘Well/Fit’, i.e. no active disease symptoms, and score 3 indicating ‘Managing well’, i.e. medical problems are well controlled). There were no differences in mental HRQoL or health change subscale scores.

Physical functioning at baseline and at three, six, and twelve months

In the R-group, a statistically significant increase in the PF-domain score was observed over time (χ2 = 8.424, p = 0.038). Post-hoc analyses indicated a significant difference after correcting for multiple testing in PF-domain scores when comparing physical functioning at both three and six months with scores at twelve months (p = 0.006 and p = 0.004, respectively). In contrast, domain scores in the NR-group remained unaltered (χ2 = 7.284, p = 0.063). Between-group analysis revealed that PF-domain scores were significantly higher for the R-group at baseline, at three, and at six months after ICU-admission (p<0.001) (Fig 2).

Fig 2

Course of physical functioning domain scores during the first year after ICU-admission for R-group and NR-group in boxplot with 10-90th percentile whiskers.

** p≤0.01 *** p<0.001.

Healthcare utilisation and work participation

Overall, there was no difference either in the number of ICU readmissions within the year after discharge or in rehabilitation intensity between the R and NR-group (Table 2A). Patients made use of six appointments with healthcare professionals (HCP) during the first three months after discharge (Table 2B). During this period of time, patients in the NR-group received home care more often (44 versus 17%, p = 0.013). This difference in the percentage of people receiving home care persisted in the later periods (three to six and nine to twelve months after admission). It was only during the last term that the NR-group made more use of HCP (5 [1-12] over 2 [0-3], p = 0.004).

Table 2

Post-ICU characteristics (A) and healthcare utilisation (B) over the first year after ICU admission.

A. Post-ICU characteristics	All	NR at 12m	R at 12m	p-value
	N = 65	N = 36 (55%)	N = 29 (45%)
ICU readmission in 1 year, n (%)	2 (3)	2 (6)	0 (0)	0.498
Rehabilitation intensity
No rehabilitation	12 (19)	5 (14)	7 (24)	0.372
Self-initiated or primary care	17 (26)	9 (25)	8 (28)
Cardiac rehabilitation programme	20 (31)	10 (28)	10 (35)
General rehabilitation centre	14 (22)	10 (28)	4 (14)
Nursing home	2 (3)	2 (6)	0 (0)
B. Healthcare utilisation (over a 12 week period)
Discharge to 3 months post-ICU
Number of appointments HCPa	6 [3–15]	6 [2–16]	6 [3–11]	0.830
Received home care, n (%)	21 (32)	16 (44)	5 (17)	0.013
3–6 months post-ICU
Number of appointments HCPa	3 [1–11]	3 [1–11]	3 [1–9]	0.613
Received home care, n (%)	18 (28)	15 (42)	3 (10)	0.012
9–12 months post-ICU
Number of appointments HCPa	3 [1–8]	5 [1–12]	2 [0–3]	0.004
Received home care, n (%)	16 (25)	13 (36)	3 (10)	0.021

Healthcare professional (HCP): General practitioner, Medical specialist, Social worker, Physical therapist, Occupational therapist, Speech therapist, Dietician, Alternative medicine, Psychological help, Company doctor

Throughout the first year after ICU-admission, close to a third of the patients in both groups worked less hours than before ICU-admission (Table 3). Before ICU admission more than half of patients participated in work activities, with a median total of 4 [0-26] hours of work per week. Shortly after admission, work participation dropped to 15%. More than a third of patients actively participating in work activities did so for less hours than before ICU-admission. After twelve months, work participation was at 30%. Although there was no significant difference in the amount of patients participating in work activities before ICU admission, the R-group did work more hours per week (p = 0.04). However, at three, six, and twelve months after discharge, the NR-group consistently had a lower number of patients who were able to work (p = 0.004, p = 0.006, p = 0.001, resp.).

Table 3

Participation in paid and volunteer work activities and hours worked over the first year after ICU admission.

Work activities	All	NR at 12m	R at 12m	p-value
	N = 65	N = 36 (55%)	N = 29 (45%)
Before ICU admission
Participates in work activities, n (%)	36 (55)	17 (47)	19 (66)	0.297
Total hours of work, h/w	4 [0–26]	2 [0–10]	20 [0–36]	0.040
3 months after ICU discharge
Participates in work activities, n (%)	10 (15)	1 (3)	9 (31)	0.004
Works less hours than before ICU-admission, n (%)	23 (35)	12 (33)	11 (38)	0.782
6 months after ICU discharge
Participates in work activities, n (%)	15 (23)	4 (11)	11 (38)	0.006
Works less hours than before ICU-admission, n (%)	21 (32)	11 (31)	10 (35)	0.778
12 months after ICU discharge
Participates in work activities, n (%)	21 (32)	5 (14)	16 (55)	0.001
Works less hours than before ICU-admission, n (%)	22 (34)	14 (39)	8 (28)	0.283

Overall health-related quality of life at baseline and at three, six, and twelve months

When visualised by use of a spider web chart, overall HRQoL revealed marked differences between groups at all time points, including baseline (Fig 3). This difference in HRQoL at baseline was not reflected by a clinically relevant difference in frailty scores (Table 1). Comparing role limitations due to physical problems (RP) in both groups resulted in the highest score difference at twelve months after admission (NR: 0 [0-50]; R: 100 [75-100], p<0.001). Mental health and Role Emotional domain scores remained high in both groups. The full data on domain scores at baseline, three, six and twelve months can be found in the S2 Table.

Fig 3

Health-related quality of life in R- and NR-group at baseline, three, six, and twelve months after admission, with visual indication of healthy reference value per domain of the RAND-36 questionnaire.

Abbreviations: PF, Physical Functioning; SF, Social Functioning; RP, Role Physical; RE, Role Emotional; MH, Mental Health; VT, Vitality; BP, Bodily Pain; GH, General Health perception; HC, Health Change.

Discussion

In this prospective twelve-month observational period, more than half of the long-term ICU survivors showed no significant sign of physical recovery. These results substantiate the findings of our previously published retrospective study on recovery in an ICU outpatient clinic cohort [6]. In addition, after ICU-admission this was associated with shortcomings in self-efficacy and societal participation. Persistent physical NR was a marker for impairment in (almost) all domains of HRQoL. Ultimately, proxy-derived HRQoL at baseline helped to identify patients at risk for non-recovery.

It is commonly known that age, pre-admission health status, and frailty impact recovery after critical illness. Although there was an imbalance in age between groups in our study, we believe it is unlikely to be the sole cause of the observed lack of recovery. At first glance, CFS at baseline did not differ up to the point of clinical risk identification, despite there being a statistically significant difference. However, a closer look at baseline HRQoL revealed marked differences between groups. Specifically in the physical HRQoL domains, patients that did not recover after 12 months experienced more health-related impairments before admission. These findings may represent the rehabilitation potential of this patient group. However, as these patients also had a higher LOS in ICU and more days on mechanical ventilation and there was only a modest difference in frailty before admission, contributing the lack of recovery solely to pre-admission health seems inappropriate. Nevertheless, proxy-derived HRQoL may help to perform an adequate risk assessment for non-recovery, and could potentially be simplified by an isolated PF-domain score in the acute hospital setting. In addition, a subsequent assessment at three months after discharge has added value in the identification of long-term non-recovery, and can be a trigger for further rehabilitation. This adds to the existing literature, since pre-ICU data on quality of life and physical functioning comes from studies in the elective surgical group [14, 15].

In general, our findings are consistent with previously reported impaired recovery of physical functioning and HRQoL in ICU survivors. Firstly, in a study by Hofhuis et al. (2021), physical functioning domain scores varied between 6 and 59 from baseline to 10 years after ICU-discharge. This patient cohort never reached the age-adjusted reference value for the physical functioning domain. Secondly, in a follow-up study investigating physical functioning between three and twelve months after ICU discharge, researchers observed that the physical component score (PCS) remained far below age-adjusted reference values [16]. However, some differences need to be addressed. In a follow-up study conducted in 156 post-ICU patients, severity of illness was associated with physical recovery at the six months follow-up [17]. Interestingly, in our data set, patients with physical non-recovery did not have higher severity of illness scores. This dissimilarity may be due to group allocation based on physical recovery rather than ICU-characteristics. In conclusion, despite current rehabilitation options, critical illness survivors demonstrate long-term non-recovery in physical functioning.

Due to these long-term health problems, ICU survivors require more healthcare during and after hospital discharge compared to non-ICU patients, the latter reflected in a higher number of emergency room visits and hospital readmissions [7]. In a recent Dutch cohort study, ICU survivors were found to have up to five times higher healthcare costs compared to a healthy control group [18]. Our study shows that physical NR-patients may contribute more to this extreme increase in costs over the first year after admission with a primary focus on the need for home care and assistance in daily living. Targeting this patient group in future interventions may have a positive impact on healthcare costs.

Furthermore, the inability to return-to-work of ICU survivors is one of the most prevalent personal and social consequences of a long-term ICU admission. In a recent systematic review and meta-analysis of 52 studies, roughly one-third of the ICU survivors that were employed prior to ICU admission were jobless up to five years after ICU admission [19]. A prospective study in the north of the Netherlands indicated that the work rate (percentage of full-time) of a long-stay ICU-cohort was only 32.2% at six months after ICU discharge [20]. As disturbing as these results already are for all ICU survivors, return-to-work in NR-patients seems to be even worse, as not even 15% of patients participate in work activities twelve months after admission. The dire situation of this specific group warrants more extensive and elaborate aftercare interventions to ensure that these people have a higher chance of societal reintegration and regain a sense of purpose.

This study provides valuable information regarding pre-ICU health status, with in-depth assessment of HRQoL before admission in the acute setting, and recovery after critical illness. Yet, our study is limited by the number of patients and the heterogeneous origin of ICU-admission. Despite the in-depth information provided due to the longitudinal follow up design with several time points, the findings represent a select patient group in the northern part of the Netherlands. Results may not be identical in a different, for example academic or international, setting. Furthermore, the number of lost-to-follow-up has the potential to create unaccounted bias, although the percentage is lower than reported in previous literature on post-ICU follow-up services and research [4]. Moreover, as this study has a longer and more extensive follow-up than our regular specialised outpatient clinic, it is notable that the researchers managed to complete the follow up the majority of participants despite the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic. Group characteristics of these dropouts make it unlikely to contribute to a substantially lower percentage of non-recovery (S1 Table).

In conclusion, long-term recovery after critical illness is limited in a proportion of ICU survivors. This lack of recovery is reflected in overall impaired HRQoL and untenable consequences for patients’ healthcare needs, as well as their ability to reintegrate in society. In our study, baseline HRQoL appeared to be an important predictor of long-term outcomes, but not CFS. And (proxy-derived) HRQoL may help to identify patients at risk of long-term non-recovery. It is essential to investigate rehabilitation potential of patients that are unable to recover within the current aftercare setting. Personalised preventative and aftercare interventions to support patients at risk are urgently needed.

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Reviewer #1: I have a few comments:

1. “Long-stay adult patients (≥ 48 hours)”--this definition is inappropriate; >= 48 hours is not a prolonged stay.

2. The sample size is too small for a exploratory analysis.

3. "Patients in the NR-group received home care more often and had higher healthcare utilisation."--always show the quantity and statistical inference in result section.

4. The novelty of the study is unclear because there has been many such studies in the literature, though the journal may not put novelty as a priority.

5. "Missing data due to either early mortality"--this can cause the competing risk in the model.

6. You can also study the risk factors for poor functional recovery.

Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript concerning long-term follow up of critical illness survivors; an area of great importance. The manuscript describes a prospective, single-center, follow-up study. Congratulations to the authors on a well-performed and interesting study. It is impressive that you obtained full follow up on 65 out of 81 patients.

I have some comments and suggestions:

Abstract

In the last sentence under “purpose” you write: “In this prospective follow-up study, changes in Health-Related Quality of Life (HRQoL), twelve months after ICU admission, were observed in long-stay ICU patients.” This is actually a result. I would recommend that the last sentence in “purpose” is a brief description of the aim of the study, “The aim of this study was to….”

In “methods” you write “Long-stay adult patients” – I think you need to include that they are long-stay ICU-patients (although I know that there is a limited number of words in an abstract, it still needs to make sense, when you read only the abstract)

You write “the relation between non-recovery, healthcare utilisation, and work activities was explored”. I find this sentence confusing. What is non-recovery? (I can guess, but you have not introduced the term). Can you somehow rephrase so that it makes sense for someone, who has not met the term non-recovery previously? Patients, who survive, but somehow are not well anyway?

In the methods section you should mention which tool you use to assess HRQoL.

You need to explain abbreviations the first time you use them – you write NR (which I guess to be non-recovery) without explanation.

You write “untenable consequences” – I do not believe that consequences can be untenable, however, situations can.

Manuscript

Introduction: well described, clear aim. I would probably use an additional small paragraph to clarify why you focus so much on physical function, rather than psychological or cognitive, for example.

Material and methods

Study population: interesting that half of your patients are admitted following elective surgery. Could you state what kind of surgery it is? What do you think it means, in order of interpreting your results? I would guess that patients, who have elective surgery, are not quite as ill as for example chronically ill medical patients?

You write that “Participating patients who did not survive until the one year follow-up, did not complete the end-of-study HRQoL measurement, or were lost to follow-up were excluded from analysis”. This puzzles me. A patient, who survived 11 months and completed all follow up until then is not interesting? Could you explain the rationale for this?

Results

You should describe the different scales/measurements used, in the methods section. You here mention a Clinical Frailty Score (which I find really good) without having introduced it.

Healthcare utilisation and work participation

You write: ”Overall, there was no difference either in the number of ICU readmissions within the year after discharge or in rehabilitation intensity” – between the R and the NR group?

Page 9, line 188 – this can not be table 1 as well? Table 2, perhaps?

Discussion

You write: “Furthermore, the inability to return-to-work of ICU survivors is one of the most prevalent social and economic consequences of a long-term ICU admission”. Is it really? Quite a few of the patients are retired, and ICU patients are getting older and older. I agree that it is important, however, I believe that it is more important on a personal level, and that the costs associated with the highly increase healthcare needs are more prevalent.

Your ”Limitations” section is very brief. I would elaborate a bit more, for example on the high number of elective patients, the limited number of patients etc. However, I would also add a “Strengts” section, as your study does have several strengths. It can make sense to present strengths and limitations next to each other.

Conclusion

You write: “In conclusion, long-term recovery after critical illness is limited in ICU survivors.” As I see your study, the whole point is that recovery is limited in SOME survivors, and not (or, much less) in others, and that some cut-off value in a sub-score of the RAND-instrument seems promising in order to identify them?

Reviewer #3: This is a single centre cohort study of ICU survivors that explores a range of relevant patient centred outcomes. The sample size is rather small, with quite high levels of loss to follow-up. This is certainly a topical area, and there are interesting data included on employment status and visits to hospital that are often not reported in follow up ICU studies. I have the following comments:

1. In the abstract, I think it important to note that baseline (ie pre-ICU illness) HRQoL and health status was different between the R and NR groups for the reasons outlined below.

Methods

2. Population – what was the justification for the 48 hours cut-off for prolonged stay. Was this MV duration or any ICU LoS. This should be clarified.

3. What was the fate of those patients excluded based on cognitive impairment at the time of screening? How many were there? This could be a major source of inclusion bias especially as delirium and cognitive impairment are associated with adverse long terms outcomes.

4. The method of dichotomising the population should be justified more clearly in my view. Allocation of all patients below the age-adjusted reference value is potentially problematic as this presumably represents a population average? Did the authors consider a value more than a SD from the age adjusted reference as potentially more relevant given this is a population distribution of scores? They have in effect compared those in the lower versus highest 50% of the ‘normal’ population yet this distribution could be interpreted as including many people whose health is within the normal population? This seems a slightly odd way to classify a ‘non-responder’ especially.

5. In relation to point 4 (above) how was the baseline value for the RAND-36 used, given the known association between pre-existing measures of health and longer term HRQoL scores (in fact this is likely the main determinant of longer term HRQoL). For example this is shown in reference 13 and other larger cohort studies. The key issue with the method used is that the baseline differences are showing patients with different pre-existing health rather that the impact of critical illness alone.

Results

6. The number of patients screened was 107, but it is unclear whether these were all potentially eligible patients given there are 1500 admissions per year. This is a potential source of selection/inclusion bias. Can the authors clarify? The STROBE flow diagram in figure 1 does not clarify this. Surely there must have been many more than 107 patients requiring >48 hours during the study period?

7. For the patients classified as NR versus R groups, can the authors clarify whether this was based on individual age/gender matched predicted status, or a single population value? Assuming it is the former can more information be provided about where these data come from, eg is it based on the Dutch population?

8. The data in table 1 presents the comparison of those classified as recovered versus non-recovered. Ca the authors clarify several points:

a. Baseline HRQoL is dramatically different, especially in the physical functioning domain, energy, and general health domains. This confirms previous studies suggesting that pre-existing health is probably the major determinant of post ICU HRQoL or physical functioning status (see point 5 above). This is a non-modifiable predictor, but it effectively means that the non-recovered patients were likely ‘non-recovered’ to some extend BEFORE their critical illness, ie this is not about recovery, rather pre-existing health status. Can the authors comment and consider this.

b. The methods state that Bonferroni correction for the many tests was used but this table does not indicate whether this has been applied or which are considered significant after application.

c. For co-morbidities it is important to clarify and state which tool was used to capture these as it will likely influence the prevalence and range reported.

9. The observation in the test of a trend towards improvement in the R group but not in the NR group is another indicator that this may simply reflect the pre-illness health status. In many ways it is the relationship to recalled baseline health within individuals that is most relevant, for example percent of baseline. Could the authors evaluate that measure which may be more relevant? The non-response in the NR group likely reflects strongly pre-existing health trajectory and status?

10. Table 2 seems to be mislabelled as table 1 (page 9)

11. For the Use of appointments with HCPs, it is relevant to understand if these were scheduled or unscheduled care. The lack of differences would be expected if this was scheduled appointments? Can the authors provide more information about this measure?

12. In table 3, it is unclear what (voluntary) refers to. Is this voluntary work or does this intend to capture employment? Given there is a marked difference in age between the R and NR groups is this relevant to work, as I assume older people would be less likely to engage in work of any type?

13. The HRQoL data (page 11 and figure 3) illustrates the difficulty in interpreting the attributable impact of ICU admission versus differences in health status and health trajectory between the R and NR groups that pre-dated illness. The authors need to highlight this carefully and note that their approach to dichotomising the population may simply be identifying people on better versus poorer health trajectories at the time the critical illness required ICU admission. This has been demonstrated in previous work and is a key issue with understanding and interpreting ICU outcomes.

Discussion

14. The discussion would benefit from some re-structuring as the points made seem to ‘jump about’ a little. In my view the authors should focus far more on the difficulty in adjusting for pre-existing health in ICU outcomes studies. They have clearly shown that the baseline HRQoL based on relative judgement is a major determinant. I think the use of NR is rather misleading in this regard as this may simply represent different levels of pre-existing health. This has been illustrated in several similar larger cohort studies, with a key challenge being that baseline HRQoL is often not available due to the unscheduled nature of an ICU admission. This is actually a strength of this study. In my view the authors may not have fully considered the possible explanations for their findings. Their assumption that more rehabilitation may benefit NRs based on using baseline HRQoL is not really justified, as these people may not have capacity to recover?

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27 Jun 2022

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Comments to Reviewer #1:

I have a few comments:

1. “Long-stay adult patients (≥ 48 hours)”—this definition is inappropriate; >= 48 hours is not a prolonged stay.

The authors thank reviewer 1 for questioning our definition of a prolonged stay. We agree with the reviewer that giving a clear cut off value of prolonged stay of ICU patients can be complicated. The length of stay of our patient group is highly dependent of for example admission category (acute versus elective) and severity of illness. Nevertheless, for research purposes it is essential to identify a patient group at risk of long term health problems. Our local ICU population consists of a high number of elective surgical patients who will be admitted to the ICU per protocol for a maximum of 2 days, if there are no serious complications. It is commonly known that these patients have a lower chance of long term impairments after ICU admission and therefore we aimed to focus on patients with a length of stay ICU above 2 days. And indeed, our data show that this selection of patients was able to detect prolongued ICU stay with a median LOS ICU of 5 days with an IQR of 4-10.

2. The sample size is too small for a exploratory analysis.

We thank the reviewer for the critical note on our sample size. We agree that we studied a modest amount of patients over time. Nevertheless, we believe that smaller-scale studies can provide us with valuable information regarding the recovery of individual patients, providing us with more delicate information on an n=1 level. With this study, we attempt to move forward from looking into individual predictors in large retrospective cohort studies to find targets for an individualized intervention program. We believe this prospective long-term study provides us with more in-depth information to achieve this goal. Nevertheless, we will take the remark into account when developing future studies in this patient group.

3. "Patients in the NR-group received home care more often and had higher healthcare utilisation."--always show the quantity and statistical inference in result section.

The authors thank the reviewer for pointing out the missing quantity and statistical inference of this result in our abstract. We adjusted this section accordingly.

4. The novelty of the study is unclear because there has been many such studies in the literature, though the journal may not put novelty as a priority.

We thank the reviewer for being critical about the novelty of our research output. We agree with the reviewer that there are several studies reporting patient-reported outcomes, like health-related quality of life and healthcare utilisation. However, to our understanding we are the first group using physical functioning scores to allocate patients to a more frail/at risk group (Recovery/Non-recovery). Combining this classification with the in-depth change is HRQoL and healthcare utilisation gives a clear indication of the impact of non-recovery over time. In addition, we have completed a more extensive follow up than previously reported studies (ref 3, 4) with 3 follow up meetings and added proxy measurements to obtain more detailed information on quality of life before ICU-admission. Therefore we believe this study adds valuable new information to the research field.

5. "Missing data due to either early mortality"--this can cause the competing risk in the model.

We agree with reviewer 1 that missing data due to early mortality can have a negative impact on the quality of the used model. As stated in the ‘Method’ section, we limit this potential bias by comparing the baseline characteristics of the patients included in the analysis with those of the patients we lost to follow-up. Despite a difference in sex and the incidence of chronic kidney disease these groups were identical.

6. You can also study the risk factors for poor functional recovery.

We agree with reviewer 1 that studying the potential risk factors for poor functional recovery is an interesting idea to investigate. In a previous retrospective study, we have identified physical performance at the three month outpatient visit as a predictor for lack of recovery in physical functioning after one year, but this was not the case for commonly used characteristics for disease severity. The current manuscript is a prospective continuation of this previously conducted research:

7. Beumeler LFE, van Wieren A, Buter H, van Zutphen T, Bruins NA, de Jager CM et al. Patient-reported physical functioning is limited in almost half of critical illness survivors 1-year after ICU-admission: A retrospective single-centre study. PloS one. 2020;15(12):e0243981.

Comments to Reviewer #2:

Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript concerning long-term follow up of critical illness survivors; an area of great importance. The manuscript describes a prospective, single-center, follow-up study. Congratulations to the authors on a well-performed and interesting study. It is impressive that you obtained full follow up on 65 out of 81 patients.

The authors thank reviewer 2 for the compliment regarding our research. We agree that it encompasses a topic of great importance and are thankful for the contribution of reviewer 2 to further improve this manuscript.

I have some comments and suggestions:

Abstract

In the last sentence under “purpose” you write: “In this prospective follow-up study, changes in Health-Related Quality of Life (HRQoL), twelve months after ICU admission, were observed in long-stay ICU patients.” This is actually a result. I would recommend that the last sentence in “purpose” is a brief description of the aim of the study, “The aim of this study was to….”

The authors thank reviewer 2 for the suggestion to clarify our research aim in the abstract. We have adjusted the aim accordingly.

In “methods” you write “Long-stay adult patients” – I think you need to include that they are long-stay ICU-patients (although I know that there is a limited number of words in an abstract, it still needs to make sense, when you read only the abstract)

We have changed the patient definition to long-stay adult ICU-patients. Thank you for pointing this out.

You write “the relation between non-recovery, healthcare utilisation, and work activities was explored”. I find this sentence confusing. What is non-recovery? (I can guess, but you have not introduced the term). Can you somehow rephrase so that it makes sense for someone, who has not met the term non-recovery previously? Patients, who survive, but somehow are not well anyway?

The authors thank reviewer 2 for suggesting to use a different, more clear, term for non-recovery in the abstract. We have changed non-recovery to physical functioning, as this variable is used to allocate patients to either the recovery or the non-recovery group. We believe this makes this sentence more clear to readers that are not familiar with the term non-recovery.

In the methods section you should mention which tool you use to assess HRQoL.

We have added the tool we use to assess HRQoL in the method section of the abstract.

You need to explain abbreviations the first time you use them – you write NR (which I guess to be non-recovery) without explanation.

We have added the full description of the NR abbreviation to the results-section of the abstract.

You write “untenable consequences” – I do not believe that consequences can be untenable, however, situations can.

The authors thank reviewer 2 for their feedback on the use of the word ‘untenable’. We have changed the abstract accordingly.

Manuscript

Introduction: well described, clear aim. I would probably use an additional small paragraph to clarify why you focus so much on physical function, rather than psychological or cognitive, for example.

We thank the reviewer for requesting additional rationale for our focus on physical functioning. In this manuscript, we further investigate the impact of physical functioning prospectively as a follow-up of a previously conducted retrospective analysis. In this study we identified a large proportion of our patients lack recovery in physical functioning throughout the year. We have added a clarification in the introduction section.

Material and methods

Study population: interesting that half of your patients are admitted following elective surgery. Could you state what kind of surgery it is? What do you think it means, in order of interpreting your results? I would guess that patients, who have elective surgery, are not quite as ill as for example chronically ill medical patients?

We thank the reviewer for this question and clarify this finding with pleasure. As can be read in table 1, 25% of our patients had been admitted after elective surgery, of which a large proportion of a cardiac nature (23% after acute surgery and 52% non-surgical). In fact, the majority of patients admitted to our ICU are patients undergoing elective surgery and staying in our ICU for 1 or 2 days per protocol. Using the 48 hour cut-off in our inclusion criteria aims to exclude these per-protocol visitors, as it is commonly known that these, indeed, are not quite as ill and most probably have less long-term health problems. However, when a patient has a longer length of stay after an elective surgery, this is predominantly caused by complications during or after the procedure, rendering them more vulnerable for a prolonged stay and long-term health problems.

You write that “Participating patients who did not survive until the one year follow-up, did not complete the end-of-study HRQoL measurement, or were lost to follow-up were excluded from analysis”. This puzzles me. A patient, who survived 11 months and completed all follow up until then is not interesting? Could you explain the rationale for this?

The authors thank the reviewer for sharing their thoughts with us. As we used the HRQoL measurement at the 12 month follow up period to allocate patients to one of the two groups, it was not possible to include patients that were lost to follow up before the endpoint. These patients are most certainly interesting, which is why we investigated the baseline differences between the patients that completed the full follow-up and the patients that were unable to do so. There were minor differences between these groups at baseline (sex and incidence of chronic kidney disease), indicating that these groups were quite similar at baseline. Nevertheless, we lose some data regarding their recovery up until the moment of drop out. Other studies have ‘solved’ this issue by scoring all deceased patients with a score of 0 on the RAND-36 subscales, but we believe this does not adequately represent reality. In the future, we hope to also include these patients by using a mixed model which allows for some missing values.

Results

You should describe the different scales/measurements used, in the methods section. You here mention a Clinical Frailty Score (which I find really good) without having introduced it.

We have added the description of the clinical frailty score in the method section.

Healthcare utilisation and work participation

You write: ”Overall, there was no difference either in the number of ICU readmissions within the year after discharge or in rehabilitation intensity” – between the R and the NR group?

We have added the group description to the first sentence of this paragraph.

Page 9, line 188 – this can not be table 1 as well? Table 2, perhaps?

We have changed the table number to table 2.

Discussion

You write: “Furthermore, the inability to return-to-work of ICU survivors is one of the most prevalent social and economic consequences of a long-term ICU admission”. Is it really? Quite a few of the patients are retired, and ICU patients are getting older and older. I agree that it is important, however, I believe that it is more important on a personal level, and that the costs associated with the highly increase healthcare needs are more prevalent.

The authors thank the reviewer for engaging in this Interesting discussion. As a large proportion of our patient group is above the retirement age, we agree that the effect of the inability to return to work will most probably be more evident on a personal and social level. We have adjusted this sentence accordingly. However, we want to point out that in the overall group there is also a significant amount of patients unable to fully return to work after discharge. With a median age of 67, this means that there is a high probability that not only the retired people are affected. An overall percentage of 34% that works less hours than before ICU-admission may imply still have an economic impact for the patient and their family, co-workers, etc.

Your ”Limitations” section is very brief. I would elaborate a bit more, for example on the high number of elective patients, the limited number of patients etc. However, I would also add a “Strengts” section, as your study does have several strengths. It can make sense to present strengths and limitations next to each other.

We have elaborated more extensively in the limitation paragraph of the discussion, adding some strengths of our research.

Conclusion

You write: “In conclusion, long-term recovery after critical illness is limited in ICU survivors.” As I see your study, the whole point is that recovery is limited in SOME survivors, and not (or, much less) in others, and that some cut-off value in a sub-score of the RAND-instrument seems promising in order to identify them?

We thank the reviewer for sharing their vision of the main conclusion of this manuscript. We adjusted the first sentence of the conclusion accordingly. We agree that one of the findings is also that the sub-score can be used for identification as was described in our previous retrospective study on this subject. However, in this manuscript we aim to investigate the implications when it comes to overall HRQoL and healthcare use in the post-ICU period.

Comments to Reviewer #3:

This is a single centre cohort study of ICU survivors that explores a range of relevant patient centred outcomes. The sample size is rather small, with quite high levels of loss to follow-up. This is certainly a topical area, and there are interesting data included on employment status and visits to hospital that are often not reported in follow up ICU studies. I have the following comments:

1. In the abstract, I think it important to note that baseline (ie pre-ICU illness) HRQoL and health status was different between the R and NR groups for the reasons outlined below.

The authors thank reviewer 3 for their feedback on focussing more on the baseline differences in HRQoL of the R and NR groups. We have therefore added this to the result section of the abstract and addressed this issue further throughout the manuscript.

Methods

2. Population – what was the justification for the 48 hours cut-off for prolonged stay. Was this MV duration or any ICU LoS. This should be clarified.

We have specified the rationale behind including patients with a LOS of 48 hours or more in our method section. For further elaboration on this, we would like to refer reviewer 3 to our response to question 1 of reviewer 1 and the first question on the method section of reviewer 2.

3. What was the fate of those patients excluded based on cognitive impairment at the time of screening? How many were there? This could be a major source of inclusion bias especially as delirium and cognitive impairment are associated with adverse long terms outcomes.

The authors acknowledge that being critical of potential bias in our study selection is necessary and thank reviewer 3 for this. Exclusion before screening due to cognitive impairment only occurred when patients were unable to give deferred informed consent, which indicated severe cognitive problems. For example, this could be the case for patients with a severe postanoxic coma. Patients with mild cognitive problems or delirium were mostly able to give deferred informed consent. We do not believe this is a major source of inclusion bias, as of the total patients screened for this study, 2 were excluded due to severe cognitive impairments. To clarify the extent of cognitive problems that would lead to exclusion, we have added an example to the last sentence of the study design paragraph.

4. The method of dichotomising the population should be justified more clearly in my view. Allocation of all patients below the age-adjusted reference value is potentially problematic as this presumably represents a population average? Did the authors consider a value more than a SD from the age adjusted reference as potentially more relevant given this is a population distribution of scores? They have in effect compared those in the lower versus highest 50% of the ‘normal’ population yet this distribution could be interpreted as including many people whose health is within the normal population? This seems a slightly odd way to classify a ‘non-responder’ especially.

The authors thank the reviewer for the opportunity to critically reflect on our method of dichotomising the population. We agree that dividing the patients in two groups leads to a rather strict separation of responders and non-responders. In our previously published paper in which we retrospectively investigated this cut off (ref 7), we used Dutch, age-matched, healthy controls. However, measures of subjective HRQoL often result in a large spread of results, leading to large SD. In the control group we have used that would mean using a cut off value of 40 out of 100 on the physical functioning subscale, which still indicates a high amount of physical impairments. In addition, we found this cut off value to result in a ‘non-responder’ group with a median PF-subscale score of 35 out of 100 at 12 months, indicating this cut-off results in a non-responder group with severely impaired physical functioning.

5. In relation to point 4 (above) how was the baseline value for the RAND-36 used, given the known association between pre-existing measures of health and longer term HRQoL scores (in fact this is likely the main determinant of longer term HRQoL). For example this is shown in reference 13 and other larger cohort studies. The key issue with the method used is that the baseline differences are showing patients with different pre-existing health rather that the impact of critical illness alone.

The authors agree with reviewer 3 that it is impossible to consider long-term recovery in HRQoL without taking into account the baseline/pre-ICU HRQoL. However, as a large proportion of our patients are admitted acutely and probably experienced some health problems related to this illness before admission, we believe this may affect the baseline HRQoL. In most of our patients admission to the ICU is not the starting point of their illness and it is commonly known that frailty before ICU affects long-term outcomes. However, as shown in table 1, preadmission frailty did not differ extremely between patients (CFS 2 indicating the patient is ‘Well’ compared to CFS 3 indicating the patient is ‘Managing well’). Furthermore, we believe using the healthy age-adjusted control value for measuring the ability of recovery still gives an indication of which patients are in need of additional aftercare, despite their previous health-related problems. Nevertheless, we agree that discussing the baseline differences in HRQoL greatly improves this manuscript.

Results

6. The number of patients screened was 107, but it is unclear whether these were all potentially eligible patients given there are 1500 admissions per year. This is a potential source of selection/inclusion bias. Can the authors clarify? The STROBE flow diagram in figure 1 does not clarify this. Surely there must have been many more than 107 patients requiring >48 hours during the study period?

As stated in the results section of the manuscript, screening took place between May and November of 2019. The reviewer is right to state that in 2019 there were around 1500 admissions to our local ICU. Of these admission, more than half are per protocol after elective surgery. These patients usually have a LOS of max. 48 hours after the procedure, leaving them out of the current study. In addition, the summer period usually results in a lower amount of elective surgeries in general. The number of patients screened was therefore the actual amount of patients eligible in that year for this study. This number is similar to the number of patients that are eligible for our standard care outpatient clinic (150-200/year), which uses 48 hours in need of mechanical ventilation as a cut-off value.

7. For the patients classified as NR versus R groups, can the authors clarify whether this was based on individual age/gender matched predicted status, or a single population value? Assuming it is the former can more information be provided about where these data come from, eg is it based on the Dutch population?

We thank reviewer 3 for asking clarification on the healthy reference value used. In the method section we state that an age-adjusted reference value was used. We clarified the characteristics of this control group (Dutch, aged 65-75) in the Data collection section.

8. The data in table 1 presents the comparison of those classified as recovered versus non-recovered. Ca the authors clarify several points:

a. Baseline HRQoL is dramatically different, especially in the physical functioning domain, energy, and general health domains. This confirms previous studies suggesting that pre-existing health is probably the major determinant of post ICU HRQoL or physical functioning status (see point 5 above). This is a non-modifiable predictor, but it effectively means that the non-recovered patients were likely ‘non-recovered’ to some extend BEFORE their critical illness, ie this is not about recovery, rather pre-existing health status. Can the authors comment and consider this.

The authors agree that the baseline differences in HRQoL should be more prominently discussed in this manuscript, hence we have added a separate paragraph on baseline HRQoL and frailty in the result section. As mentioned above, there are notable differences in the physical HRQoL domains and subjective general health perception, but differences in pre-admission frailty significant, but small. In addition, the NR-group also had a longer LOS in ICU and more days of mechanical ventilation, making it plausible that the lack of recovery is caused by a combination of pre-ICU health and ICU-admission.

b. The methods state that Bonferroni correction for the many tests was used but this table does not indicate whether this has been applied or which are considered significant after application.

We applied a Bonferroni correction for the analysis in the paragraph ‘Physical functioning at baseline and at three, six, and twelve months’ for the post-hoc tests used to assess changes over time in physical functioning domain scores. As mentioned in the methods, a p-value<0.008 was considered significant here. We did not apply the correction in the univariate comparison of group characteristics. We have added a clarification in the paragraph on physical functioning at the different time points.

c. For co-morbidities it is important to clarify and state which tool was used to capture these as it will likely influence the prevalence and range reported.

We used the checklist of the National Intensive Care Evaluation (NICE) database for the indication of comorbidities at ICU-admission. This has been added to the method section of the manuscript for clarification.

9. The observation in the test of a trend towards improvement in the R group but not in the NR group is another indicator that this may simply reflect the pre-illness health status. In many ways it is the relationship to recalled baseline health within individuals that is most relevant, for example percent of baseline. Could the authors evaluate that measure which may be more relevant? The non-response in the NR group likely reflects strongly pre-existing health trajectory and status?

We thank the reviewer for suggesting to investigate the change in HRQoL over time rather than the ability to reach the average for healthy controls. We agree with the reviewer that pre-illness health status plays an important role in the ability to recover. However, we do not believe this is the only factor contributing to the R-group improving over time and the NR-group remaining at a stable low level of physical functioning. We are sure the reviewer also agrees with us that the ability to recover after critical illness, if any illness, is impacted by a variety of factors, including but not limited to health-status before ICU. The improvement of the R-group over time could also indicate this is a less heterogenous group for which the current rehabilitation options fit better. One other explanation that we didn’t investigate in this study could be found in lifestyle behaviour or social/personal/environmental contextual factors. We therefore do not believe the allocation of our patients to groups based on physical functioning is a foul proof method, but it does provide a clear indicator for patients in need for additional or more user-centred aftercare interventions. Although investigating change over time would most definitely provide valuable additional insights, we do not believe this will provide us with a marker for rehabilitation needs in this specific setting.

10. Table 2 seems to be mislabelled as table 1 (page 9)

We relabelled table 1 as table 2.

11. For the Use of appointments with HCPs, it is relevant to understand if these were scheduled or unscheduled care. The lack of differences would be expected if this was scheduled appointments? Can the authors provide more information about this measure?

The number of HCP includes scheduled and unscheduled care and was asked in retrospect in our used questionnaire. However, taking into account the nature of the appointments it most probably reflects scheduled care as only the medical specialist could be consulted in an acute setting of unscheduled care. The authors are curious to know why reviewer 3 indicates the lack of differences to be as expected.

12. In table 3, it is unclear what (voluntary) refers to. Is this voluntary work or does this intend to capture employment? Given there is a marked difference in age between the R and NR groups is this relevant to work, as I assume older people would be less likely to engage in work of any type?

We thank the reviewer for directing us to the unclear terminology used. We have changed the title of table 3 accordingly to make it clear that we mean paid and volunteer work. The option for volunteer work was added as we believe that this indicates an important factor of participation in society. Despite the NR-group being older, a large proportion still participates in work related activities. The inability to return to these activities can have important implications on a personal, social and economic level.

13. The HRQoL data (page 11 and figure 3) illustrates the difficulty in interpreting the attributable impact of ICU admission versus differences in health status and health trajectory between the R and NR groups that pre-dated illness. The authors need to highlight this carefully and note that their approach to dichotomising the population may simply be identifying people on better versus poorer health trajectories at the time the critical illness required ICU admission. This has been demonstrated in previous work and is a key issue with understanding and interpreting ICU outcomes.

We thank the reviewer for emphasizing again the importance to discuss pre-ICU health in our manuscript. Throughout the paper we have made changes accordingly.

Discussion

14. The discussion would benefit from some re-structuring as the points made seem to ‘jump about’ a little. In my view the authors should focus far more on the difficulty in adjusting for pre-existing health in ICU outcomes studies. They have clearly shown that the baseline HRQoL based on relative judgement is a major determinant. I think the use of NR is rather misleading in this regard as this may simply represent different levels of pre-existing health. This has been illustrated in several similar larger cohort studies, with a key challenge being that baseline HRQoL is often not available due to the unscheduled nature of an ICU admission. This is actually a strength of this study. In my view the authors may not have fully considered the possible explanations for their findings. Their assumption that more rehabilitation may benefit NRs based on using baseline HRQoL is not really justified, as these people may not have capacity to recover?

We acknowledge your valuable comment in the revised structure of the discussion, the conclusion, and the abstract. We have changed the discussion accordingly and added additional reflections on the fruitful discussions with the reviewers.

The authors thank all the reviewers for their contribution to the quality of this manuscript.

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