| Literature DB >> 35547607 |
Tiarnán Ó Doinn1, James M Broderick1, Rebecca Clarke1, Niall Hogan1.
Abstract
Background: The internet has become an increasingly popular resource among sports medicine patients seeking injury-related information. Numerous organizations recommend that patient educational materials (PEMs) should not exceed sixth-grade reading level. Despite this, studies have consistently shown the reading grade level (RGL) of PEMs to be too demanding across a range of surgical specialties. Purpose: To determine the readability of online sports medicine PEMs. Study Design: Cross-sectional study.Entities:
Keywords: health literacy; patient education; readability; reading grade level; sports medicine
Year: 2022 PMID: 35547607 PMCID: PMC9082750 DOI: 10.1177/23259671221092356
Source DB: PubMed Journal: Orthop J Sports Med ISSN: 2325-9671
Figure 1.Box plot displaying the mean reading grade level for each test. The upper edge of the box represents the 75th percentile, the lower edge of the box represents the 25th percentile, the box represents the IQR, the horizontal line in each box represents the median, upper and lower whiskers extend within 1.5 times the IQR, and red circles represent outliers. IQR, interquartile range. SMOG, Simple Measure of Gobbledygook.
Web-Based Patient Educational Materials by Website
| Website | No. of Articles (%) | Cumulative Mean Reading Grade Level ± SD (95% CI) |
|---|---|---|
| AAOS | 140 (38.6) | 11.1 ± 1.5 (10.8-11.3) |
| ACSM | 37 (10.2) | 14.6 ± 2.0 (13.9-15.3) |
| AMSSM | 7 (1.9) | 10.4 ± 1.7 (8.8-12.0) |
| AOSSM | 109 (30.0) | 14.2 ± 1.9 (13.8-14.5) |
| COA | 70 (19.3) | 10.4 ± 1.1 (10.2-10.7) |
| Total | 363 (100) | 12.2 ± 2.5 (12.0-12.5) |
AAOS, American Academy of Orthopaedic Surgeons; ACSM, American College of Sports Medicine; AMSSM, American Medical Society for Sports Medicine; AOSSM, American Orthopaedic Society for Sports Medicine; COA, Canadian Orthopaedic Association.
Mean Reading Grade Level of Patient Educational Articles
| Test | AAOS | ACSM | AMSSM | AOSSM | COA |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Flesch-Kincaid GL | 9.6 | 14.1 | 8.8 | 13.1 | 9.1 |
| (5.8-15.0) | (9.5-19.0) | (5.6-10.9) | (7.2-19.0) | (6.7-13.1) | |
| Raygor Estimate | 12.0 | 15.0 | 10.0 | 16.0 | 10 |
| (6.0-17.0) | (11.0-17.0) | (6.0-13.0) | (7.0-17.0) | (7.0-17.0) | |
| Coleman-Liau | 11.2 | 14.4 | 10.9 | 14.2 | 10.3 |
| (6.8-15.5) | (10.8-19.0) | (6.7-12.3) | (7.7-18.0) | (8.2-14.1) | |
| Fry | 11.0 | 16.0 | 10.0 | 15.0 | 10 |
| (6.0-17.0) | (11.0-17.0) | (6.0-12.0) | (7.0-17.0) | (7.0-17.0) | |
| SMOG | 12.0 | 15.5 | 11.5 | 14.8 | 11.6 |
| (7.7-16.3) | (11.9-19.0) | (8.6-13.0) | (10.4-19.0) | (9.8-15.8) | |
| FORCAST | 10.8 | 11.8 | 10.5 | 11.8 | 10.5 |
| (8.5-12.4) | (10.2-13.7) | (9.5-11.0) | (9.3-13.4) | (9.3-12.3) | |
| Gunning Fog | 11.7 | 15.8 | 10.9 | 15.1 | 11.6 |
| (7.7-17.0) | (9.4-19.0) | (6.7-13.2) | (9.8-19.0) | (9.3-17.3) | |
| Cumulative, mean ± SD (range) | 11.1 ± 1.5 | 14.6 ± 2.0 | 10.4 ± 1.7 | 14.2 ± 1.9 | 10.4 ± 1.1 |
| (7.0-15.4) | (10.7-17.7) | (7.0-12.1) | (8.3-17.3) | (8.2-14.9) |
Data are reported as mean (range) unless otherwise indicated. The Flesch Reading Ease Score was excluded because it expresses results as an index score. AAOS, American Academy of Orthopaedic Surgeons; ACSM, American College of Sports Medicine; AMSSM, American Medical Society for Sports Medicine; AOSSM, American Orthopaedic Society for Sports Medicine; COA, Canadian Orthopaedic Association; GL, Grade Level; SMOG, Simple Measure of Gobbledygook.
Mean Percentage of Linguistic Units for Each Website
| AAOS | ACSM | AMSSM | AOSSM | COA | Overall | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Complex words | 15.8 | 22.9 | 14.8 | 22.3 | 13.9 | 18.1 |
| Long words | 36.6 | 43.8 | 34.3 | 43.5 | 33.2 | 38.7 |
| Dale-Chall unfamiliar words | 25.0 | 32.9 | 23.6 | 33.2 | 23.9 | 28.1 |
| Fog hard words | 14.7 | 21.0 | 13.8 | 20.8 | 13.2 | 16.9 |
| Overly long sentences | 15.8 | 38.8 | 9.3 | 28.8 | 16.0 | 22.0 |
AAOS, American Academy of Orthopaedic Surgeons; ACSM, American College of Sports Medicine; AMSSM, American Medical Society for Sports Medicine; AOSSM, American Orthopaedic Society for Sports Medicine; COA, Canadian Orthopaedic Association.
Figure 2.Linguistic unit summary. *Significantly different compared with all other linguistic units (P < .05, analysis of variance).
Top 20 Plain-Language Best-Practice Guidelines
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| Write for your intended audience.
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| Give important information first.
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| Add useful headings.
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| Group information into chunks.
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| Use ample white space.
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| Limit the number of messages.
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| Display information in a logical order, with useful headings and topic sentences.
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| Use lists, bullet points, and tables.
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| Write in a conversational style using an active voice in the present tense.
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| Avoid jargon and use terms consistently.
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| Use simpler words or phrases.
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| Avoid hidden verbs and noun strings.
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| Minimize and explain abbreviations and acronyms.
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| Avoid unnecessary exceptions.
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| Use short, direct, and simple sentences.
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| Use short paragraphs.
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| Use positive language.
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| Keep the subject, verb, and object close together.
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| Use simple typography consistently.
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| Use illustrations and visuals to support written materials.
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Edited Passage of Text With Improved Readability
| Original Passage | Edited Passage (Mean RGL = 4.9 |
|---|---|
| Anterior knee pain is not usually caused by a physical abnormality in the knee, but by overuse or a training routine that does not include adequate stretching or strengthening exercises. In most cases, simple measures like rest, over-the-counter medication, and strengthening exercises will relieve anterior knee pain and allow young athletes to return to their favorite sports. | Pain at the front of the knee is often not caused by a physical knee problem. Pain at the front of the knee is often due to: Overuse training A lack of stretching A lack of strengthening Rest Over-the-counter drugs Strength training |
RGL, reading grade level.
Excerpt from “Adolescent Anterior Knee Pain” article on OrthoInfo website provided by American Academy of Orthopaedic Surgeons (https://orthoinfo.aaos.org/en/diseases--conditions/adolescent-anterior-knee-pain).
Calculated from the 7 RGL tests as described in the Methods section.