| Literature DB >> 31372173 |
Zahra Bahadoran1, Parvin Mirmiran2, Azita Zadeh-Vakili3, Farhad Hosseinpanah4, Asghar Ghasemi5.
Abstract
The "results section" of a scientific paper provides the results related to all measurements and outcomes that have been posted earlier in the materials and methods section. This section consists of text, figures, and tables presenting detailed data and facts without interpretation and discussion. Results may be presented in chronological order, general to specific order, most to least important order, or may be organized according to the topic/study groups or experiment/measured parameters. The primary content of this section includes the most relevant results that correspond to the central question stated in the introduction section, whether they support the hypothesis or not. Findings related to secondary outcomes and subgroup analyses may be reported in this section. All results should be presented in a clear, concise, and sensible manner. In this review, we discuss the function, content, and organization of the "results section," as well as the principles and the most common tips for the writing of this section.Entities:
Keywords: Medical Scientific Journals; Result; Writing Scientific Papers
Year: 2019 PMID: 31372173 PMCID: PMC6635678 DOI: 10.5812/ijem.92113
Source DB: PubMed Journal: Int J Endocrinol Metab ISSN: 1726-913X
Difference Between Data and Results (13, 15)
| Data | Results |
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| Are the facts (often numbers) obtained from experiments or observations. | Are the meaning and interpretation of data |
| Can be presented as raw (e.g. concentration of a measured variable), summarized (e.g. mean and SD), or transformed (e.g. percentage). | Are expressed as statements that explain or summarize what the data show |
| Can rarely stand alone | May have a direction (e.g. decrease, increase) or magnitude, e.g. 2-fold, 10% increased |
| May contain statistical significance, e.g. | |
| E.g. mean (SD) fasting blood glucose was 180 (20) mg/dL in patients with type 2 diabetes. Mean fasting blood glucose was 95 (5) mg/dL in non-diabetic subjects. | E.g. mean fasting blood glucose was significantly higher in patients with type 2 diabetes than in non-diabetic subjects [180 (20) vs. 95 (5) mg/dL, |
aThe text presented in square brackets is data and the remainder is a result.
General Tips for Presenting Data in Tables and Figures
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| Give a caption to each element consisting of a number and a title |
| Avoid using abbreviations in the title of tables or the legend of figures |
| Keep the table title and figure legend brief but sufficiently detailed to explain the data included |
| Do not overload the title with details |
| Put the elements within the text, or include them in the rest of the manuscript; do not use both approaches |
| Distinguish the element from any appendix materials provided at the end of the manuscript (if placed at the end) |
| Put each element as close as possible to where it is first mentioned in the text (if placed within the text) |
| Use an explicit number for each table, figure, etc. |
| Refer to each element appropriately within the text and if needed explain it |
| Use parentheses when referring to elements within the text |
| Have a consistent appearance for the elements, e.g. use a uniform box or frame and a uniform font |
| Use footnotes or captions to explain any unclear data |
Some Do's and Don’ts for Word Choice in a “Results Section” (7, 13)
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| Use straightforward verbs for stating results, e.g. show, indicate, demonstrate, highlight, identify, detect, observe, find, and confirm |
| Use “significant” or “significantly” just for statistical significance |
| Be careful about using negative sentences: |
| Instead of using double negatives, be straightforward and use positive terms |
| Make the sentence clear by omitting negative words or negative sentence constructions, e.g. “There was no significant interaction…” instead of “We did not find a statistical interaction ….” |
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| Do not use “reveal” to state the results because it is a funny word that suggests something was found perhaps by magic. |
| Do not use emotive words to describe the significance of the results, e.g. interestingly, unfortunately, curiously, remarkably, inexplicably, importantly, crucially, and critically. |
| Do not use the word “level” instead of “concentration.” |
Do's and Don’ts of Writing a “Results Section“
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| Present demographics or simple descriptive statistics first |
| Describe results from the most to the least important and from the primary outcomes to the secondary outcomes |
| Organize the results section using separate headings as in methods or by categories |
| Make up the results section using a combination of text, tables, and figures |
| Quantify results using appropriate indicators of centrality, probability, and statistical significance values |
| Match each result by its corresponding assessment/measurement method |
| Be focused on results related to the research hypothesis/question |
| Provide units according to the journal style and in a constant manner throughout the text |
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| Report all analyses including those unrelated to the main study hypothesis/question |
| Compare the study results with those of previous reports |
| Discuss and interpret the results |
| Restate similar results in both textual and non-textual elements |
| Present raw data |
| Present data lacking units of measurements |
| Present crowded and confusing tables or figures |